All Comments on 'Worries of a First-time Werewolf'

by Oridian

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

uhm

more please?

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 2 years ago

Well thought out, even better written. Interesting characters. 5*

395694395694over 2 years ago

love the story would love a continuation to this

Sextus_PropertiusSextus_Propertiusover 2 years ago

Very good story. Lots of future possibilities to go with this story. Love to see more, as Sticks and Graham grow into a couple and meet his parents the werewolves.

redpoppiesredpoppiesover 2 years ago

I loved the story. It seems to be a common trope in many stories here on literotica to make the main male character kind of a blockhead; slow on the uptake. It is evident here as well. Good thing he had smart women looking out for him.

CreepyDragonCreepyDragonover 2 years ago

I hope this becomes a series! So good!

RickshawroadRickshawroadover 2 years ago

An excellent story, well thought out and well told :)

Would love to hear more of their future

rml65rml65over 2 years ago

Wonderful story! Definitely needs a second part to find out what happens next

DracumSumDracumSumover 2 years ago

Ok, that was adorable

BriteStudioMKMBriteStudioMKMover 2 years ago

Ha! Awesome. Made me laugh and smile most of the way through.

I’m also SUPER glad this wasn’t the usual type of werewolf story I’m used to seeing on here. This was a blast to read from start to finish and you’ve created a fun little world rife for exploration, as well as introduced a few interesting characters to do it with.

You should publish this, dude. I think you could do pretty well!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This is wonderful. You’ve come up with a fabulous world and remarkable characters. I agree this could easily become something more; a book series, a TV series or movie(s).

5*

Tc

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I have to agree with the other comments. This story was a homerun.

ender2k2kender2k2kover 2 years ago

That was awesome. Very creative and well written. I hope there is another chapter and that is available soon. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Graham's father is a mage. It's weird that he had to read aloud a spell on a newspaper to discover that he was a mage too. You'd think a mage would routinely check his offspring for any magical affinity.

stewartbstewartbover 2 years ago

You've got your work cut out for you ... wonderful story! As others said - needs a part 2 ... werewolves at the academy! Let's not forget "meet the parents". Then the wedding - first job - and so on. This could be a series of 5's.

NnnelsonNnnelsonover 2 years ago

Great story. Definitely need a part two. It just got really interesting with the possibilities.

Stewart’s missed the is sex better in wolf or human form.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story, I'd love this to be continued.

BadW0lfRisingBadW0lfRisingover 2 years ago

This needs a part two. Actually, you could turn this into a several hundred page novel and I'd read it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

This was, as far as I can tell, an original, and unique, 6entry in the truly vast number of werewolf tropes and tales on Lit. A very different take on an old idea. Your execution was extremely good, thoughtfully and thoroughly connected to the protagonist's world. Graham's bear encounter was a great scene, with terror, bravery, loyalty and discovery all occurring within about 10 or 15 minutes. Ha! A mage AND a werewolf! And maybe a girlfriend who used to be a wild, feral animal. Hmm. Now that I put it that way, I can relate. 😎

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

LOVED THAT ENDING!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Found it amazing, one of my most captivating read, huge potential for sequel i feel , hope you share the view :) Bertrand

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

No, no, no this can’t be the end, it’s such a great story easily worth continuing.

Covert43Covert43over 2 years ago

Definitely needs a sequel, amazing story

Ramjet57Ramjet57over 2 years ago

Excellent start for a longer theme. Please keep writing about Graham and his ongoing issues.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Brilliant, sweet story. And I reaaaalllllyyyy hope this is only the first chapter!

Cowman2000Cowman2000over 2 years ago

Please do another chapter it’s too good of a story to just die out like this

mac1729mac1729about 2 years ago

I have read a lot of stories on this site and this is one of the best. I too would love to see another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

More please. Lovely story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well if there was a story I'd like a sequel too it's this one haha trying to teach a wolf human manners lol

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Can already imagine his letter home:

Dear mom and dad, why didn't you telle me I was a werewolf?!?!

Best Regards

Graham

P.S. Got a new girlfriend

P.P.S. I implore you to come to Tiwani and help me teach her how to wear pants

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

oh, this deserves a sequel... and perhaps a tie-in to "STRAY WEREWOLF"?

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Oh, this is such an unfinished tale. The possible branches of this story are so many. More please.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

That's something I've never read before. I think it's sweet for a wolf to change in to a werewolf!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

You really need to continue this story.

Red_22bRed_22b10 months ago

Second chapter urgently required! Awesome.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Please create more parts for this story. It is very good.

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Dragons. Also, worldbuilding. As well as character development and plot advancement and all that stuff. But mostly it's dragons. I've uploaded more stories to https://oridian.sofurry.com, especially clean dragony stories which won't be appropriate on literotica, and a few lon...