by Nylon1
Good quick little read. I would've liked a drunk mum accidentally pissing with son in her headscissors though. Maybe a second chapter. Did like the son sabotaging his own pants; a reversal from the usual.
The weakened stitches failed? LOL. Talk about contrived plot elements... that one takes the cake.
some adjectives seem to get in the way... "her forbidden mouth" is sort of like the fake porn on the internet where middle aged porn stars address each other as "brother" and "sister" instead of using actual NAMES.
Plus incest is not illegal in a lot of places... so her mouth is NOT forbidden if that's what both want.
Don't listen to the other guy. Interesting story. I liked it. Keep it up!
This story started out EXTREMELY bad a fucking freeloader!!! I hate idiot freeloader kids!!! DUMPED immediately!
Dear Anonymous,
It’s a STORY! But, on the positive side, the character must have worked if he got under your skin that much. Chill, baby.😀
I loved it. I think more detail in the sex scenes would have been great but it's a lovely story.
I thought this story was sexy. I love some good erotic wrestling, and when it is between family member's it is even more exciting. hope there is a round two ware mom wins
A nice idea but crap writing. Missing words. Bad grammar. Muscly? No such word, you should have used muscled. Dad's not Dads.
If you continue to write you need basic instruction in the English language. You need to know how to form a story.
But really you need to re-read it before you post it and probably get an editor or an experienced proof reader to do it for you.
This was really good I wish the story continued I love stockings and sexy women in them and there tiny panties 😍😘
I thought that the two stories were excellent, and i can't wait for numbers 3 and 4. The rematch. Keep Up The Great Work
So hot to be wrestling with mommy..Mine strutted around the house showing off her lacy full cup bras…I loved snapping the satiny straps..these are such great stories….
JT