All Comments on 'Wrestle with Mother'

by Nylon1

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sunburycdsunburycdover 2 years ago

Good quick little read. I would've liked a drunk mum accidentally pissing with son in her headscissors though. Maybe a second chapter. Did like the son sabotaging his own pants; a reversal from the usual.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

The weakened stitches failed? LOL. Talk about contrived plot elements... that one takes the cake.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

some adjectives seem to get in the way... "her forbidden mouth" is sort of like the fake porn on the internet where middle aged porn stars address each other as "brother" and "sister" instead of using actual NAMES.

Plus incest is not illegal in a lot of places... so her mouth is NOT forbidden if that's what both want.

nashman1000nashman1000over 2 years ago

Don't listen to the other guy. Interesting story. I liked it. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
1 star dammit!

This story started out EXTREMELY bad a fucking freeloader!!! I hate idiot freeloader kids!!! DUMPED immediately!

Nylon1Nylon1over 2 years agoAuthor

Dear Anonymous,

It’s a STORY! But, on the positive side, the character must have worked if he got under your skin that much. Chill, baby.😀

dazodazoover 2 years ago

I loved it. I think more detail in the sex scenes would have been great but it's a lovely story.

jtw0978jtw0978over 2 years ago

Nice story way to lead us into the whole thing nice

Primus21Primus21over 2 years ago

I thought this story was sexy. I love some good erotic wrestling, and when it is between family member's it is even more exciting. hope there is a round two ware mom wins

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
What was this supposed to be?

A nice idea but crap writing. Missing words. Bad grammar. Muscly? No such word, you should have used muscled. Dad's not Dads.

If you continue to write you need basic instruction in the English language. You need to know how to form a story.

But really you need to re-read it before you post it and probably get an editor or an experienced proof reader to do it for you.

tucarne8tucarne8almost 2 years ago

This was really good I wish the story continued I love stockings and sexy women in them and there tiny panties 😍😘

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I thought that the two stories were excellent, and i can't wait for numbers 3 and 4. The rematch. Keep Up The Great Work

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Fun story I gave it 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

So hot to be wrestling with mommy..Mine strutted around the house showing off her lacy full cup bras…I loved snapping the satiny straps..these are such great stories….

JT

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Always been obsessed with stockings and heels. These combined with water sports is my absolute heaven. I like nothing more than to drink nectar from a nylon clad lady. FFNs preferred. Love to read about them, other people's adventures and participate. Would love my job to be ...