by chunks
A fashion trick? Hardly dearie. Women have been happily shaving their pussies since the invention of the safety razor! Hell, probably some really adventurous ones used straight razors before that! Lol.
Does it add a little girl look? Yeah, for some women, others it just doesn't. While that's always a naughty fantasy most guys won't admit to, it's just secondary anyway. I love going down on bald pussy, there's nothing like a smooth pussy on my cheek and tongue! Shave myself, add some oil and it feels really amazing!!
My girl doesn't call me daddy, but she does shave her pussy, without me asking! Oh, and gee, we've been married longer than you've been fucking. If anyone can find it in that forest of hair! ;)
spoken like a true immature little lezzie
A sequel PLEASE! Maybe have sis knocked up by bro and maybe a threesome with mom getting pregnant as well.
Like others have said I'd love a sequel but leave the mom out of the bed with them please.
Oh so nice. What a story. So well written. I love it. Reminds me of personal experience.
please continue, but keep them exclusive. sibling love is the purest form of love. great story.
Great story, great finish.
I hope there are more chapters. This story has so much potential.😄
This story is probably the bestest I've read here so far.
Please, please, don't fuck it up with another chapter.
I enjoyed the story, but would like to read about what happens next. I suspect the Mother is mad.... maybe she is a sister and married her brother... maybe the Mother as a secret incest about her Brother or a parent member. Just a few of my thought's about what happens and the aftermath of the discovery.
It had 5 stars until the last line, then it was just another unfinished story. Damn!
WHAT CAN I SAY........GREAT......COULD DO WITH MORE,DOES MOM LEAVE THEM TO IT ! DOES SHE FLIP HER LID ! DOES SHE GET PERSUADED TO JOIN !
I didn't know that the mom had lost them. Good thing they made enough noise so that she could find them. Good thinking.
too many "off ofs" and superfluous "ofs" as well. would have been 5 stars otherwise...
great story, stupid american sloppy...
Short sweet and to the point....of no return???? I'd be interested to know what happened after 'and thats how Mom found us'..... Kind of like getting caught naked by the COPs parking with your girlfriend.....LOL
Outstanding story: compact, to the point (of contact), fast paced and lovable. I would like to know how long it took this Hulk to get into his mom? Any little rug rats in the works, (with either one or both females)?
5*
BJ
Excellent, compact story. Great character build up, A sequel is definitely needed...
Excellently comprised, and a sweet read .
Keep the bro & sis loving and going !
So sweet and so torrid !
Theyre just fine together, and I believe that a spontaneous episode of
“The Breakfast of Champions” … 69 would seal the deal of their ❤️❤️, yes ?
I think so 🍸🍸
Outstanding, you must follow this up with an all family affair..........():\
Why do I have a feeling that Mom is gonna want some too. Maybe Dad can join in, too.
VERY good. Excellent progression of the action. Contains enough details to increase the believeability of the relationship. But the part I loved the most is the very last line: "that's how Mom found us".
6*
BJ
(1/22/2023) Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. but it's been eight years since mom found them bumping uglies. You added a new chapter to your “A New Dawn” series two months ago so we know you’re still writing. Please continue this love story. But please, no daddy doing Kaitlyn. She belongs to Mikey. Five stars and this goes on my favorites list.
Love it. Sister brother stay lovers. Mom can join but no dad. And where's chapter 2??
It could have been written a little better. Was Kait not a virgin? Something to think about. Could also been a little longer
Good story. I liked it very much. Please continue with the mother getting involved.
Aaah! Great story, but it's the second one I read in a row that ended with a cliffhanger that you never resolved.
A good story and a rating of four. would have been a 5 had their been a description of abundant Pussy Hair
Great story, needs more! Sexy, emotional, human
I know, it was 8 years ago....
These two do not seem to have reached anywhere near the end of their road....
Five for you
Oh no you don't. You leave us hanging with that last sentence after such a good story
Really, seriously, that's how you ended that wonderfully sweet story? Sighs, what a shame.
Sundragon796,Did you not read the part where she told him she was a virgin too?And that she wanted him to be her first?Reading comprehension helps you to not look foolish when asking a question that's clearly answered in the story..🤦♂️
Ssswwweeeeeetttttt!!!!! Very nice story, and the ending...!!!
Why is there no follow-up to this printed/posted yet??!! Mom...hhmmmm??!! Sounds like an even kinkier plan than just Mike and Kait!!
Five**5**Star story!! Mostly, because Mike defended Kait's honor...I wonder if Coach went after opposing team's coach, for that crappy attempt to distract Mike!! His response (Mike's) was totally cool!!
🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🌋💯
Absolutely one of, if not THE best story I've ever read on here, or anywhere else!!! This one had it ALL for a first-time fuck! Six stars and FAVORITE status - which I don't give often.
I have to agree with everyone, this story deserves additional chapters. this is amazing and the ending, what a cliffhanger... so many unanswered questions.