All Comments on 'Wrestling with Incest'

Excellent story. I was caught banging my female cousin.

I have to agree with everyone, this story deserves additional chapters. this is amazing and the ending, what a cliffhanger... so many unanswered questions.

Absolutely one of, if not THE best story I've ever read on here, or anywhere else!!! This one had it ALL for a first-time fuck! Six stars and FAVORITE status - which I don't give often.

Formulaic.

Ssswwweeeeeetttttt!!!!! Very nice story, and the ending...!!!

Why is there no follow-up to this printed/posted yet??!! Mom...hhmmmm??!! Sounds like an even kinkier plan than just Mike and Kait!!

Five**5**Star story!! Mostly, because Mike defended Kait's honor...I wonder if Coach went after opposing team's coach, for that crappy attempt to distract Mike!! His response (Mike's) was totally cool!!

🌌🌌🌌🌌🌌🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🌋💯

Sundragon796,Did you not read the part where she told him she was a virgin too?And that she wanted him to be her first?Reading comprehension helps you to not look foolish when asking a question that's clearly answered in the story..🤦‍♂️

Really, seriously, that's how you ended that wonderfully sweet story? Sighs, what a shame.

More pleaseeeeeeeeeeee

Oh no you don't. You leave us hanging with that last sentence after such a good story

What did the parents do? Page 3/4 or Chapter 2?

Wow, fun, sexy, intimate, wonderful...thank you!

Great story, needs more! Sexy, emotional, human

I know, it was 8 years ago....

These two do not seem to have reached anywhere near the end of their road....

Five for you

A good story and a rating of four. would have been a 5 had their been a description of abundant Pussy Hair

Aaah! Great story, but it's the second one I read in a row that ended with a cliffhanger that you never resolved.

I miss Ohio

Chris81203

Good story. I liked it very much. Please continue with the mother getting involved.

It could have been written a little better. Was Kait not a virgin? Something to think about. Could also been a little longer

Love it. Sister brother stay lovers. Mom can join but no dad. And where's chapter 2??

(1/22/2023) Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. but it's been eight years since mom found them bumping uglies. You added a new chapter to your “A New Dawn” series two months ago so we know you’re still writing. Please continue this love story. But please, no daddy doing Kaitlyn. She belongs to Mikey. Five stars and this goes on my favorites list.

Ha! Loved it!

Needs follow up, love it.

VERY good. Excellent progression of the action. Contains enough details to increase the believeability of the relationship. But the part I loved the most is the very last line: "that's how Mom found us".

6*

BJ

Why do I have a feeling that Mom is gonna want some too. Maybe Dad can join in, too.

One of the best I have read here. Bravo!

Holy Toledo. Perfect.

Outstanding, you must follow this up with an all family affair..........():\

So sweet and so torrid !

Theyre just fine together, and I believe that a spontaneous episode of

“The Breakfast of Champions” … 69 would seal the deal of their ❤️❤️, yes ?

I think so 🍸🍸

Excellently comprised, and a sweet read .

Keep the bro & sis loving and going !

Excellent, compact story. Great character build up, A sequel is definitely needed...

Outstanding story: compact, to the point (of contact), fast paced and lovable. I would like to know how long it took this Hulk to get into his mom? Any little rug rats in the works, (with either one or both females)?

5*

BJ

Great story. You should continue this story. Great job. Keep writing.

This needs a part two! LOL

Definitely needs a Part 2 -- if only to find out what happens next.

Yes, as everyone else said - please make part 2

Short sweet and to the point....of no return???? I'd be interested to know what happened after 'and thats how Mom found us'..... Kind of like getting caught naked by the COPs parking with your girlfriend.....LOL

Of of of. How many times?

too many "off ofs" and superfluous "ofs" as well. would have been 5 stars otherwise...

great story, stupid american sloppy...

I didn't know that the mom had lost them. Good thing they made enough noise so that she could find them. Good thinking.

Wow! Great story and ending. Sequel, please.

WHAT CAN I SAY........GREAT......COULD DO WITH MORE,DOES MOM LEAVE THEM TO IT ! DOES SHE FLIP HER LID ! DOES SHE GET PERSUADED TO JOIN !

It had 5 stars until the last line, then it was just another unfinished story. Damn!

I enjoyed the story, but would like to read about what happens next. I suspect the Mother is mad.... maybe she is a sister and married her brother... maybe the Mother as a secret incest about her Brother or a parent member. Just a few of my thought's about what happens and the aftermath of the discovery.

This story is probably the bestest I've read here so far.

Please, please, don't fuck it up with another chapter.

Great story, great finish.

I hope there are more chapters. This story has so much potential.😄

Great story, but it isn't finished.

please continue, but keep them exclusive. sibling love is the purest form of love. great story.

Oh so nice. What a story. So well written. I love it. Reminds me of personal experience.

That says it all.

Like others have said I'd love a sequel but leave the mom out of the bed with them please.

A sequel PLEASE! Maybe have sis knocked up by bro and maybe a threesome with mom getting pregnant as well.

Can we have more?

spoken like a true immature little lezzie

A fashion trick? Hardly dearie. Women have been happily shaving their pussies since the invention of the safety razor! Hell, probably some really adventurous ones used straight razors before that! Lol.

Does it add a little girl look? Yeah, for some women, others it just doesn't. While that's always a naughty fantasy most guys won't admit to, it's just secondary anyway. I love going down on bald pussy, there's nothing like a smooth pussy on my cheek and tongue! Shave myself, add some oil and it feels really amazing!!

My girl doesn't call me daddy, but she does shave her pussy, without me asking! Oh, and gee, we've been married longer than you've been fucking. If anyone can find it in that forest of hair! ;)

Good stuff. All the right words, action, love, kink.. well done

shaved pussy...a fashion trick to make models look younger and wear skimmer swim suits picked up by Playboy nudes same reason. women's libbers have been wildly successful in making men into pussy's for 35 years. the little boys under 40 want a little girl NOT a woman with a hairy pussy. I laughed my ass off at a recent article, when women want a man for marriage THERE AREN'T ANY!!! LOL!!!!! Men today are WIMPS can't handle a woman they are not man enough...

Great, tight, believable short story

More please.

You took us to the top of the hill and then left us there! All panting with excitement and wondering what is to follow. If this follows the normal format Mom joins in...but I have this sneaking suspicion it will be better than that!

don't leave us hanging like this.

I loved the way they discovered their mutual attraction

but

There's no way he could have performed as physically aggressive as depicted with a groin pull.

Please add a lengthy sequel to this story....

Love your work. Keep going

This was one of the hottest stories I've read here. Your surprise ending just leaves us wanting more. You absolutely MUST continue this story line! What happens when Mom finds them?

Seriously. I'm at a complete loss for words. Calling this "amazing" is an understatement, and a serious discredit to the story. Everyone else has pretty much run the gambit of adjectives for describing how good this was. They've also pleaded enough with you to write a sequel of some sort that my doing so would be pointless at this point, especially since it has been over 2 years since you published this story. But that ending was 'priceless': "I reached around and grabbed her perky little tits and continued to pound into her hard. My hard cock was coming almost all the way out of her pussy and slamming all the way back in every time. The bed was squeaking and our skin was slap-slap-slapping and Kait was yelling, "Fuck me, Mike! Fuck me, fuck me, fuck me!!" And that's how Mom found us." There are a couple of old sayings that apply perfectly to this story: 1) "Leave your audience wanting more.", and 2) "Leave them laughing."; and chunks that is exactly what you did, but leaving your audience wanting for 2 years is a bit much- it could affect your following- so it's about time for something new from you.

OMG! The ending was absolutely perfect! I smiled. Just brilliant!

Now you HAVE to write a sequel to this! There's no way you can leave us hanging with that cliff-hanger. I gave this 4-stars, one below my all-time favorite story of yours. I've really enjoyed this story, and have especially been a fan of your other incest story, Making Out With Mom, for years now. It's seriously good to see you're still writing, but I seriously think you should consider adding more Incest stories to your catalogue. I think you're really underrated as an author and could be excellent in the genre.

Yeah, some people fail to recognize irony, and some just seem to need to just bitch. But seriously, "a woman who sleeps with more than one man in her lifetime is a whore"???

Then I guess the world is full of whores. I mean what the fuck, that came from WAY out of left field! Welcome to reality putz.

The story was really good, and like tranzmany above, my immediate reaction to mom's appearance was, "Oh shit!!!" And then a laugh followed.

There was also a very touching part as well that I appreciated.

Overall I thought it was pretty damn good, and gave it five stars.

I don't know if it should be continued but, if you do, I'm sure it'll be something good.

From you I have come to expect no less.

little boy anonymous giving his comment a tltle of "too funny" who says it was shit has no idea what there talking about.

Go away n grow up, if youve nothing constructive to say then fuck off..........

As for you chunks, carry on writing please and ignore this prick

Great story, good build up and i just enjoyed it remembering some parts of wheni wanted to fuck my sister but only got a wank from her, shame.

5* cheers

I Loved It; One Of The Best.!!!!

Cannot believe you have left us hanging after writing that great lead!

So... What happens now that their mom found them with the bloody bedsheet and all? Not that I want to know... But WE all NEED to know. Please?

God, so hot. I'm dripping wet, and I want a part two. It's the perfect story to masturbate to, and my pussy is so hot.

i hope he bred the slut for "white privilege" WHAT A CROCK OF SHIT!!!

Part 2 coming hopefully?

What happens after Mom walks in??

You can't end the story there, come on now for God sake. What happens next. Does mum get thrown on her back and gets fucked as well , finish this story....

pretty good, which story next ?

What a crock of bull shit! You make your own damn way, no one need taken care of. The lazy expect others/government to be sugar tit. FUCK THEM!!!

Beautiful. 5 Stars

Would have been a 5/5 but the ending brought it down without a followup.

More of this one please.

I want more too!

You left the door wide open for another chapter. How bad or well did mom take it finding her kids in the throus of hot sex?

//Your story

Please explain who frock is Wilson you said his name was Mike Thomas pay attention to your writing//

I heartily apologize. As I mentioned at the beginning, I didn't do my usual editing thing. In the future I'll try to live up to the quality of your stories...

Oh, no stories from you? Ah. Well then. I guess I'll just do whatever the fuck I want.

Thanks for the feedback!

Nothing finer - from a brother who had a twin sister. First looking and touching around 11 - by 13, love was in the air. Many memories still roll through my mind. This five star story brings love from long ago back to the front of my thoughts.

. . . the day that I made love to my sister for the first time.

Admittedly I had experience, but she was a virgin.

When she took my cock in her mouth she made love to it and then begged me to fuck her.

We lived like man and wife for over 10 years, in a country far away from ours, unfortunately she was killed in a road traffic accident over 20 years ago.

I had a few short relationships since and eventually married for good to a woman I love, but none of my relationships were ever as loving and the sex hasn't been as fulfilling as it was with my sister.

Still dream of her sometimes, and it's always a "wet" dream.

It would be nice to see a sequel to this one, you planted the seed already!

Great story please continue.

My brother and I were each other's firsts. We did it on our 16th birthday. We are twins. While we each got other boyfriends and girlfriends, we had sex at least once a week until we went away to college, then we had it everyday. We both went to Syracuse and mom and dad got us an off campus apartment. We just told everyone we were married to explain the same name.

Get part 2 out and get the Mom to have a 3-some with them .

that teenagers, and both virgins, are such experts at foreplay, cunnilingus and fellatio. Lots adults aren't half as good at sex as these teens.

Five Stars - nothing else needs to be noted.

I'm reading this the second time around! ...just randomly ran across it! I'd forgot to add a thought last time I posted. ...after he lays down for a nap after all the awesome lil sister sex, he won't be able to stand up at all, much less walk, lol! He basically just hit that groin injury with a sledge hammer! Hehehe ;) ...thats gonna huuuuurt!

Still in love with the story! Love the forward sister knowing what she wants and going after it! The brother wasn't too cliche' with his 'but your my sister' routine, heh... No way a guy would open his mouth saying anything negative if his hottie gymnast sister was jacking him off! Rofl ;)

...loved that they were both virgins.

A beautiful story full of love. You can't not finish it. We all have our own imaginations but reading it from a very good writer can be more rewarding. Bring mom in somehow and finish it!!!!

We want more. Great story

I liked it.

Very very HOT, first Kait's wet spot, then her rubbing and t he hand/fingers and blowjob into screwing ..... she is as horny as he is and knows what she wants. It's good they talked through it. The strong orgasms they gave each other will stay in their minds now. Of course being found by their Mom finishing doggie style might not be a hit !! Maybe, Mom might want to get what Kait got ??? I guess his muscle pull is all better now ? Thanks and hope for another chapter.

Loved the last line - reality strikes!

I felt that this was going to be just another mediocre story. I am glad to say that I was wrong. For an unedited story it was refreshingly clean and error free. It was just the thing to whet my appetite for more, as two pages is really just a preview of what could be a marvelous journey. Having a gymnast partner is the dream of many a randy male, and being as it is his sister that sets the stage for some fun times. Please explore these characters fully in future chapters.

That was really HOT, one of the best. Can't wait for Chapter 2.

One he'll of a story. Can't wait to find out what happens.