All Comments on 'Writer's Block'

Nice story but it should be in Group Sex. I liked the sex and the dialogue.

Loved it, there must be some more

Great detail with a very well done sexploration of the act at the ending. Would love to read a second episode of this and hope you continue writting.

...as others have commented, I do hope there is more to come in the story of Laya and Thea...

I, too, hope for more between Layla and Thea... I would love to see deeper character development as they continue their relationship.. Will the next story be the book you write?

As always, great writing. Thank you...

LLB

I loved it! I know people have said it should be in the group sex catagory but I don't agree. You can have sex with three people and still have it be between two! I loved the connection they made and can't wait to read more!

Thank you

Turned out great, but it needs more, don't you think?

You have created rounded, believable characters with an intriguing story and great (hot) sex. Well done! I'd love to hear more of Laya and Heather.

Flora

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Liked it, but not quite the right category as stated before. Still liked it :)

...it just seems incomplete. You set a story line based on Heathers' change in life and finishing a book that's been rolling around in her head for years. Then, when you get to the point that she's finding herself you stopped. Hehe...Kind of like building up to a fantastic orgasim, rolling over and saying, "Nah, I'm good." Wonderfully written though and for that I gave you 5 stars, but I'm still left feeling like I'm missing out.

A well-written story with an interesting theme but it wasn't really a lesbian story when the bulk of the action described is between a supposed prostitute and her male client. I didn't find it entirely plausible, either, that someone like Heather would so willingly and easily surrender her self-respect for the sake of a book project. Neither was it plausible that an experienced prostitute like Laya would naively assume that because the client was married it was safe to have unprotected sex with him---after all, if he does it with her, a bar pickup, who the hell else is he likely to have done it with? Five stars for the quality of writing but I've got doubts about the plot.

I loved your story, pulling me deep into it. As with so many single chapter stories you want more, as part of me screamed for, but it was on another level just perfect to stand alone, having arrived at the point of the story by itself.