All Comments on 'Writer's Block'

That ending is begging for a sequel!

The fictional person(s) might get high score average for their story but this one isn't. Moves too swiftly and doesn't enter the realm of believable. Like she's horny and sees a big cock so she completely looses it.

That was a fun story!

English English is English too! I enjoy the difference.

Thanks!

A different premise. Very good. I felt it could have been a little longer with more mixed feelings on her part, but maybe a tighter story is better.

Clever piece of writing , well done!

I gave you your five stars. Excellent story. Have a great day.

Thanks for the feedback everyone. I agree, it's short, and neither of the characters hesitate much at the situation. But I only wanted a short, fun story. I could have added another 3 pages, but chose not to.

I have other, longer works I hope you will instead enjoy, if you found this too brief.

Thanks everyone for the feedback, especially the constructive comments!

We should hear more about that....

Not sure I could picture any sister and brother in this situation. She'd need to be way more motivated to give herself up.

Oh, I loved this. The ending really cracked me up and yeah, while it could've done with being longer, I am a fan of brief erotica. Good work on this one. I'll be checking out your other works as well.

Pretty great! Doesn't have to be long to be hot, good tension of shame and lust!

Very short & simple👍🏻

I agree not everything needs to be super long and drawn out.

However since you’re one of my personal favorites on the site I’m always hopeful some of the existing stories will be expanded upon with sequels or spin-offs 🤞🏻

Regardless …always look forward to what’s next!

Great stuff!!! Always love your stories :)

Meta porn! Love it!

Liked the 'short story'. Thanks for sharing your work.