All Comments on 'Writer's Block Ch. 02'

Great build up - can't wait for more!

in spades. That's fantastic work. Interesting, unique and fun to read. I love your work girl. Keep it up.

This story is romantic, sexy, and very well written. Other than that, not so great. Is our writer the girl in the story, by any chance?

loved it i'm hooked your work is great can't wait for the rest

Please continue!I loved it.

Only when I walked away did I realize - there was no sex! And yet the story absolutely sizzles. It completely drew me in. I love the note from the father - I'd have been tempted to go to dinner with him!

but I'll say it again- you're brilliant! I'm loving this story already. You truly are talented and definitely my favourite writer on here... and it's nice knowing that you're Canadian. Keep it coming!

Damn girl, you've gotta write faster! Can't wait for the better stuff, because this is really good (again). Must be a reason why I like all your stuff.

I cannot wait to read the next chapter. This story is fantastic. You're a very talented writer.

"We're going to go read some porn together!"

Now if that wasn't the pick-up line of the decade, I don't know what is. The thing that makes it a great line is that SHE said it, not him! :)

Anxiously waiting for more!

I love this. All of it. The witty banter between Imogen and the father. The banter between her and Simeon in front of the father. I love it all. And yeah, "let's go read porn together"- amazing as a line and a way to end a chapter!

The only request I have is this: while you as the ingenious writer you are are allowed to write whatever you want please don't let her hook up with the father! (Though by your description he does sound yummy).

Love the character of Simeon and can't wait to see what happens between him and Imogen especially as they develop further.

How do you keep doing that? It doesn't even have sex yet and it's smokin hot!

I love it! But why are your girls always short and red heads?

This is sizzling and so cool!

the pure chemistry between the two of 'em is just bloody brilliant! And hot! And when the two Forsters were winding her up I was simultaneously giggling like a fool whilst melting! Ahh, you're wonderful. Thanks for the smiles. Zera x

This is shaping up great! I would just like to beg a little for you to let Sr. take her out to dinner - if only to piss of Jr!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Can't wait to read what happens next!

I'm sorry, but you don't have time to work and sleep. People are sitting by their computers anxiously waiting for the next chapter, so get to it girl!

Rarely do you find a story where the reader is captured, not only by the storyline, but by the pace in which it is delivered without losing the effect. This is a well constructed read i.e great foreplay.

Your a very talented writer, keep up the good work.

This story is way to much fun, I'm begining to have a hard time keeping track of all the great stories you have going at once. To answer the other persons question of why your heroine's are always short redheads...my guess is because she herself is a petite redhead. Atleast that's what I gather from the description and picture in your biography. Keep up the great work.

They way you write is phenomenal. I can picture the characters in my mind's eye, siting and having this wonderful dialogue. You truly have a gift for writing. You should really consider publishing your stuff. I'd buy it!

I love all your stories but I like this one in particular. Just the attention to detail. And yes, no sex, but I know when it happens it will be awesome.

why is it that in the world of romance, there's: <p>

(1) no car accidents, <p>

(2) no ugly fat women who are having fatal attraction pursuit with those handsome guy with curly hair, <p>

(3) no words on STD and other things, <p>

(4) no mental health issues, <p>

(5) no gangsters,<p>

(6) no migrant workers working to death in boiling and freezing temperatures,<p>

(7) no 5'8" Asian "socially inept" dudes who attend Berkeley or CalTech (it's always the 6'5" lean caucasian Davis whom the ladies are giddy over after a few moments of fake feigness of some kind...), <p>

(8) no Patty who's 5'8" and 197 pounds who smokes like George Burns but who has 2 advance degrees in astro physics and plasma, <p>

(9) no mention of the Iraq "war to get rid of all terrorists", <p>

(10)no starving kids in America or in the world at large <p>

how come it is always two or 4 cute couple gossiping about other's gossips or going shopping at "high end" brand name stores, drinking sophisticated drinks, talking sophisticated talks about sophisticated people and their sophisticated ideas about sophisticated marketing and commercials and high fashion and high fashion designers and how they are "changing the foundation of society" with their "revolutionary ideas," etc., etc., etc. ? <p>

i don't get it. wait, is it because it's all fantasies of men and women, and they have no basis in reality?

The fire between the two central characters is lovely. It was such a pleasure to watch them spar and dance.

Wonderfully written, I'm finding Imogen and Sim both fascinating, likable people.

Well done.

And to Anonymous below me.

You must lead such a dull life. I'm feel so sorry for you.

Great work! You are marvelous at creating sexual tension between characters, which is one of the reasons I like your work so much. Keep it up!

I'm beginning to believe this story should be in the "Romance" category.. It IS excellent writing.. And I'm very interested in seeing where this story will lead.. I'm assuming it will eventually lead to their union but in the interim will she become the Queen of Erotica as forged by his publishing company?? Does he really like her or does he want just her slutty side?? And I'm sure there will ups and downs in their relationship regardless of how they feel about each other.. Will be waiting for subsequent chapters!!

I've been waiting until I had some time to enjoy this, and I wasn't disappointed. Keep it up!

It's been awhile...there is gonna be another chapter right

great read. got me hooked! on to the next chapter.

Loved it

baaaahahahahahahahaha love how that one ended

and the 1st 2 chapters are just priceless!!! What can I say, the back and forth, the characters, the plot .... am totally hoooked.. again... and all this because i just noticed a new chapter came out... i just can't wait to finish chapts. 3, 4 , 5 etc. etc.

thank you!!

I am loving this story, firstkiss!

"We're going to go read some porn together."

What a great way to end a chapter i couldn't stop laughing. I am loving the story so far off to the next chapter. =)

I have never been much of a fan of stories that have an emotional, flighty leading lady and an in-control, powerful man.

But I do like your writing style. Wish I could write like that. Despite my issues with your leading characters (a matter of personal taste), I'm enjoying your well written contributions. Thank you for writing and sharing!

Etchings, goddess I hope there are some etchings!

Yes, another well crafted storyline from - firstkiss -. With clever interaction between mature adults.

surprised, however, that between the nouns complement and compliment you chose the one with the wrong meaning...twice in one line.

you are good, though.