All Comments on 'Writing a New Chapter'

A lovely unhurried story with well drawn characters that deserved to be a lot longer. Though only mildly erotic it is truly romantic. More please; it would interesting to see how Darla adapts to city life or do they choose a new life in the country?

This story hit me in an unusual way. I often fret over stories that are too long without having real substance. This tale seemed longer and better developed than two pages would provide to the reader. Somehow I could feel for the two characters even though they were somewhat exaggerated. For her 25 years Darla seems to have gotten into a lot of life. Sometimes it is not the person that you connect with that creates the bond, but when in life the two meet. You know that if Ryan and Darla had met a few years earlier they would never have connected as well as they did. A few years later and he might have gotten sealed off and she might well have gotten really toughened. 5* for creating the right images at the right time.