All Comments on 'Wrong Number'

Oh my god. I was dripping wet from this story, such beautiful writing. You know how to make a woman feel desired. I hope there are men like you out there...

I love going through the older stories here. You so often find a gem.

Like this one.

it was very hot..i think it needs another chapter..maybe they can meet face to face and get together..great story though keep writing.

There has to be more. That was such a hot story I loved it.

That was no wrong number - that was the right number to my clit! What a story, made even more wonderful by the funny stream of consciousness.

What a woman, what a scenario. Well told. This is maybe the best story I've ever read.

Very erotic throughout... it was a wonderfully descriptive leg massage. Loved when she broke the rules and spoke. Had a little difficulty following her dialogue on the phone, but overall truly enjoyed the experience.

loved it, thanks

I don't like reading much ...

but this was amazing!

so sexy and still funny at the same time. i especially enjoyed the tension in the air and the comically witty streams of (mmhm...) thought, haha.

i'm a girl so i probably enjoyed this more deeply than a man would've (i suppose), but if there are men like this in the world - ones that can masterfully pleasure a woman and remain controlled - all is not lost! :D

he didn't cum at the end, did he? pity. but i like that. i like that he kept his sexy promise.

i've done this sort of thing before. ;) but this scenario you've conjured - this is probably best kept to hot fiction.

Also might want to check a map regarding Mercer Island.

Dumb story.

Brilliant. Clever and funny, the characters portrayed as very human. Keep em coming :D

This was really good. I really can't find the words to describe it...wow. Blown away.

loved it!

More,,,Please !

and tales to tell in the bar-room. TK U MLJ LV NV

One would hope that you continue...after all, you did put this under the heading of romance...

will it be continue its a really great story perfect combination of romance and sex.. hope another episode will come in same way

The author has done a phenomenal job. It was well written and very engaging. Did I say oh so very hot

The progression is wonderful, the imagery erotic in the extreme. So very well done!