All Comments on 'Wrong Number'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Damn!

Talk about ironic...

~Angel

Sir_NathanSir_Nathanabout 20 years ago
O man....

Only a sick sick mind could have thought of that...

Fucking brilliant!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
disturbing

brilliantly disturbing, poor mom and jessica. what will happen to them?

crazylilsexythingcrazylilsexythingalmost 20 years ago
SO GOOD!

usually i don't comment much but this was so fuckin' fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Wicked and twisted and truely brillient

Yours is a tale of astonishing perplexity. The ending just made the floor drop out from under me. I loved it, but you are wicked!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
how embarrassing!!

OMG that's awful! man, and i though *kinky* people were sick and twisted, but you really take the cake! brilliantly plot twist; i totally wasn't expecting that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Hey

The idea of doing a phone conversation was original and the ending was great

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Evil

Brilliantly, wickedly, delightfully, evil.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
so hot!

I loved it. It was hot and surprising. I would love to know what nasty action cums next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
phone call

So did you and your daughter live out what you said on the phone ? Maybe in your next story you and your daughter can taste each other, maybe fist each other. Did you really put your whole fist in your pussy ? Awesome !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Ha

hahahaha funniest story ever

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

OMG!

StryWrter7StryWrter7over 13 years ago
Awesome Twist

Normally I don't like stories written this way (conversation back and forth without context of who is doing which side of the conversation and other details thrown in) ....but I followed yours very well.

now, to go on and see what is in store for this very foolish mother who admitted this stuff on the phone!

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