All Comments on 'Wrong Place at the Right Time Pt. 01'

Your description of "a white woman of a certain age" and how you introduced her with her eloquent language, a thought somehow popped into mind, more of the question from the Imporance of being earnest-- ""A Handbag?". My God, that was so well written looking forward to another chapter.

Can't wait to see where you take this story! Very HOT so far! Thanks for sharing!

this was a good start and yes I know it is just a fantasy story but it is a good thing Lisa is a lesbian because she had a point what if someone other than herself caught them doing that,and as I have always said why would any girl want to get a spanking as a reward for doing good in school, not to say a butt plug also this is why I bypass that part of the writing, good thing it was not long, hope part 2 has none of that

I think my only negative would be pace, a bit quick, but nice writing, some interesting language and leaving us wanting more.

This was great. Am so looking forward to part two.

Thank you everyone for your positive feedback. I means a lot to me to know you're out there enjoying yourselves with it! -Robin

I'm smiling. This was good if I leave out my judgements about Lisa already having a girlfriend, fucking a high schooler and former student, and a pending tryst with another female teacher/co-worker. A recipe for disaster. But I guess the two teachers can have some fun before the shit hits the fan. Glad this is fiction cause I would not advocate this in real life. In the interim, I await chapter 2 and I hope it doesn't involve sex with students. I don't care if they are 18.

Delicious. Yummy.