All Comments on 'Wrong Place, Right Time'

Please follow up with a story about Annie doing what she is supposed to do while wearing pink stockings. Pretty please?

Perhaps they can also bring the actual Kevin into the story, as an apology for the missed date. Maria and her BF can then demonstrate how a black couple goes about dominating an innocent white boy and a not-so-innocent white girl ☺

One can hope.

I absolutely loved the story. I'd give it ten stars if I could. I would love to see a chapter two between Annie and Maria. There's nothing hotter than a first time bisexual experience.

A bit disappointed. Not to your usual standards. It was ok, but far from hot.

nice story.nice way to drive annie in bbc...you know perfectly how some club can be hot and so many thing happens

thinks you can have a more slow writing for action in club but the all story, the surprise end are a good part

thanks for these bbc story

Fucking great story. Me and my wife have been married for four years now. We watch a lot of porn. Lately a lot of interracial porn while fucking. We’ll sixty nine and while she sucks me I’ll use her 9” dildo and fuck her with it telling her to take that black cock whore. As she tells me oh god baby yes give me that big black cock fuck me hard I’m your whore. Some times I’ll ask her if she likes that black cock fucking your white pussy. She says she has fantasized about it mostly while watching porn. We have talked about it several time lately. But what she doesn’t know is I want the black guy to make her a whore. But only for black men to use . Any takers .

OK, but could have been better. Fantasy yes, but a hint of reality would have helped. "Annie" should have resisted. Also, proofreaders need to do a better job. Where did "Derek" come from? Only 4 stars this time.

Jasmine, I strongly suspect you read Playboy magazine back in the day. Therefore, I have to wonder if this story is derived from one of the Little Annie Fanny cartoons that showed up over the course of a quarter of a century. But no matter what inspired your story, I did enjoy it and rated it as 5 stars. I find it hard to believe that one of your proofreaders did not notice Derek sticking his dick into the middle of your story. A sequel would be nice, but maybe you should finish some other projects before adding to this one.

OK that was hot. Great story. Gotta love it when a mistake turns out to be just what the doctor ordered. Good job

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This seems a lot like one of your own personal fantasies

Well dune as usual

Maggie read this with my cock in her, sitting on me.she found the story well written and it certainly made her pussy wet. she found the key to the colour of the stockings great !.

5*s all the way

Very hot and great as always. Interracial sex is such a turning whether it's a white woman or a white man servicing a BBC or several.

very good story line and great BBC initiation. loved it

I'm enjoying several of your stories and this one did not disappoint! Great work as always. For those of you looking for a writer with a long list of stories, check out the library this writer has created.

What a great story. It kept me guessing, and was both highly erotic and fast paced.

Long drawn out.

You should write a Part 2 for this; about her next visit, wearing red fishnets...

This story is that good.

Red Fishnets? Nah, probably pink!

yes indeed red fishnet please and a story along to read thank you

wife and i loved it

and yes she wants to wear rd fishnets also

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i want to watch also maybe wear some black fisnet

More about Anne!

Good story, funny twist, BBC, etc. One afternoon in HS my boyfriend popped my cherry and by graduation I had fucked a few guys and sucked a couple extra cocks. Yes, I hear it...slut, but really just getting the lay of the land (pun intended), I really enjoyed a good lay. It was much the same in college but there were two BBCs mixed in, one was a one-nighter and the other a FWB, no pussy for me but I'll be open-minded there. Overall, like many other women, I have a good sex life; I'm not sure there is a Mr. Right.

You should write a Part 2 this made me very wet.

Second part please

640. A really good and lusty tale with immediate sex and lots of it. Nice twist at the end!