All Comments on 'Wrong Turn'

Definitely short but a good start. Looking forward to chapter two; a little longer and with more character build up.

Shot dirty sweet and good*5*stars and thanks for writing'

Not usually a fan of short stroke stories, but that was HAF. I do hope you add to it.

Funny - Too quick jumping into the sex and may help to get an editor. Overall, not a bad start to a series, but make sure you know the whole story arc before you go further or you'll start to "drift"... 4*

Great job! Please continue with more chapters.

Nobody talks like that, spoiled the whole thing, which wasn't difficult as it wasn't very good to begin with.

If this is your first you've got a good thing going it was a little shirt but really hot keep it up

Five Stars. Short, but the two of them got busy quickly. Explaining why the sister was in "his" bed was funny!

You have a mind don't you? OH wait, I guess that would be a stretch in todays world of make believe men.

I actually rather enjoyed that and I don't usually like 'em quit that short so a really good surprise. I love the way you have with words and the way it flowed. There was a really natural, inner thoughts type of feel to it. I hope you'll post another one at some point.