by Bisexualadventist
i find it this is like another ending for x men 3. its nice to read something thats not a happy ending. eager to know what happens next:)
I realize that this is erotic fan-fiction, but I believe when based off of something, you should hold onto more of the original and not change things so much. This is just my advice. For example, Magneto cannot fly very fast. He can merely hover, which does allow him to propel himself forward, but at a very creeping pace. And wolverine is not a member of some ancient race older than humanity...
My suggestion is simple. Keep enough of the original story so that people don't say "WTF?" when they read it.