All Comments on 'Xeno High Ch. 02'

Awesome, Cmdr_L's long awaited return!

Lot's of room for story growth here, using Enemy Lines as grand world view. I like how you've expanded the human/xeno relations, where each has their assigned place in the society. I do agree that the initial sex scene in chapter one was abrupt. Perhaps you were too impatient to advance the plot. Nice story. 5* Let's note wait 5 years for the NEXT chapter...

Anon56