by Averlin
Your story is coming together better with each installment. I think that the length of the chapters are about right, the tease factor on info is great as it isn't over the top or too sparse. My curiosity is just what kind of programming is installed in X as it seems none asimovian in his actions. Looking forward to the next chapter.
I just stumbled on this series by accident and after reading all the chapters, I have to say that I'm hooked!! Can't wait to read the next chapter, this story has completely drawn me in. Very well-written, bravo!
this story is great fun, and i am really enjoying it. It is very well written and obviously well researched. I occasionally find the quick jumps of POV a little jarring, but that is a small detail. Looking forward to the next episode.