All Comments on 'Xylona's Afternoon Nap'

Very Nicely written Sophia ....

I love the pace of your writing and the effort you've taken to get the words right. I suspect you must obsess about editing too :-)

Both your stories are very well written and I love how you use words such as " kernel "

" distended partitions " " unyielding totality ". I've never come across them on Lit.

Your sentence construction and the choice of words indicate that English isn't your mother tongue.

I look forward to reading more of your writings :-)

PS : Please do fill in your profile. It really shouldn't matter , but most of us readers are curious about such things. :-)