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Click hereBrent was not surprised. He smiled and pulled an almost identical package from under his pillow. "And this is for you, love." His gift was also a ring. Both were platinum, wide but without stones. And remarkably, engraved inside each was the date of our Anniversary and the phrase, "Broadway Together Forever."
"I guess that's a yes."
"Ya gotta do wha'cha gotta do. Right now, that means doing you. Roll over, Kirk. My turn." BD
- COMMENTS
SissyBoy1Warszawa7 months ago@Brunosdena, the third part is a beautiful description of a man, his feelings and emotions, as well as gaining individual professional experiences and at the same time improving his professional skills. The most important thing is true friendship and love. You presented the friendship and love of Krik and Brent in an incredibly beautiful way. And the very end when Krik gives the ring to Brent and Brent was incredibly romantic to Krik.
@Brunosdena, reading your story, I loved Krik, I felt like Krik and I really wanted to be him. 🧒🏻♀️❤️🧑🏻🎭🎥👣⭐.
ps. Sorry for any mistakes and linguistic inaccuracies, but I don't speak English.
SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 📖👩🏻🦳❤️🧒🏻♀️👧🏻.
📖❤️.
@Brunosdena, trzecia część jest pięknym opisem człowieka, jego uczuć i emocji oraz zdobywania poszczególnych zawodowych doświadczeń a przy tym podwyższania swoich zawodowych umiejętności. Najważniejsze to prawdziwej przyjaźni i miłości. Niesamowicie pięknie przedstawiłeś przyjaźń, miłość Krika i Brenta. I sam koniec gdy Krik daje pierścionek Brentowi a Brent Krikowi był niesamowicie romantyczny.
@Brunosdena czytając twoją historię pokochałem Krika, czułem się jak Krik i bardzo chciałem nim być. 🧒🏻♀️❤️🧑🏻🎭🎥👣⭐.
ps. Przepraszam za błędy i niedokładności językowe ale nie znam języka angielskiego.
SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 📖👩🏻🦳❤️🧒🏻♀️👧🏻.
Exluke17 months agoWell done. Brent was an angel in many ways to Kirk. I’m glad it works out for them and this story could morph into the other long term characters in the TV show who are gay and fall for one another as the drama develops off screen. I’d have been frustrated too when Kirk was in bed with another guy just after they left St Martin’s just to talk about a potential role. The director was ok until the audition for Oklahoma, then he felt like a manipulative jerk who still had talent but was always going to get his evening work out of his lead actors. That doesn’t detract from your skill as an excellent writer, just that unfortunately both sexes in that industry have to put out at the beginning of their careers.
MarcLuciFer7 months agoBeautifully done BD! You.ve written some terrific stories, some that were much longer, even some that were more complex, but none of them were any better written or described than this little gem. I absolutely felt like I was right there living this alongside these colorful characters. Loved this from beginning to the HEA ending. Bravo!
