by LylaVyolet
I really liked the story. I loved the way the characters were beginning to understand each other. You descriptions of Zoe really drew me into the scene. The ending was a bit abrupt, but I really liked Zoe. Five stars!
Wonderful story. Perfectly describes the pleasure and desire felt when submitting to a hard cock.
From a fellow cock worshipper x
Excellent. A lot of what makes sex erotic is the situation, and this was a 10/10 situation. More like this please.
The way you characterized Zoe's submission was absolutely beautiful. It's rare for me to come across a story here where someone has written submission in the way I experience it. The need can be so overwhelming at times and absolutely devastating when need isn't being met. It's not really something you can just keep pushing aside.
And her enjoyment of giving blowjobs is so relatable. There's something a bit otherworldly about how sensual and intense the submission involved in giving a blowjob like that can be.
Well done and I'm so glad a friend had me read this!