All Comments on 'Yellow Ch. 04'

nuff said.

Another interesting chapter in this series. Keep em coming. And you are really talented, by the way.

hurry, hurry, hurry.....gotta have the next chapter!

I love your story! I hope you don't wait too long to post the next chapter.

your spelling is bismal.? you lost me several times in this story.? i dont know weather i am going or cumming.?

“your spelling is bismal.? you lost me several times in this story.? i dont know weather i am going or cumming.?” Dinkyboots, allow me to provide you with an edited version of what you were trying to say: “Your spelling is abysmal. You lost me several times during this story. I don’t know whether I’m coming or going.”

Now, Dinkyboots, do you really feel that you’re in a position to criticise others, for spelling, writing style or anything else? For punctuation, I can recommend that you read "Eats, shoots & leaves", by Lynne Truss. Your punctuation is TRULY abysmal.