All Comments on '"Yes, Mistress Valerie"'

Even for a continuing story, that was abrupt. It's like a movie that didn't finish; they just cut the film at the 30 minute mark. This had potential, but until you can add more, and/or at least have a better segue, you get a 2.

Nice start. I like stories where girls have tiny tits. I especially like lesbian stories with girls with tiny tits. Please continue. Thanks for the good start.

@jed11: I wrote this beforehand, so i'm editing it and releasing it in a chapter format.

Nice start.... I hope that dungeon bag is really full!

@anonymous: oh it is

Oh my god, PLEASE WRITE THE REST ASAP? I love it!

did you forget to send the rest of the story, i feel like i wasted my time reading this

Where is the rest of it???

A sheer time waste reading this

How does this shit get published when it clearly violates the style guidelines. Literotica sucks shit.

It's a great beginning to a story that I'm sure will continue. Valerie is training from the beginning and Clara is turning into a good little sub and doesn't know or understand what's happening. She thought it would be two girlfriends exploring sex and each other. The idiots who made the stupid comments sound like typical college age assholes looking for something to jack off to. Your style, character development, spelling, grammar and punctuation are excellent. Great job. Keep it up.

Alan

PS- I accidentally hit 1 star and you can't change it. I actually give it 5 stars.😃

I Love les activities. Would love to sub for them.

total waste of time reading