by olivias
Dear Author, A perfectly splendid loved story that transitioned into a unique plot with surprising results. Well crafted and captivating, this tale held my attention throughout and offered me a wonderful literary journey. Thank you for your story and the warm feelings it created. jntiques
I've never seen an erotic story on here without actual sex (except one of my own series, but it will get there eventually), but this is quite good. I really liked it. Thanks for giving us something for our imaginations and not just our libidos.
Very good story. Well-written, solid mechanicals, nothing to distract the reader, engaging, believable characters. More!
Well done, this is an original for sure. I look forward to reading more of your work.