by JukeboxEMCSA
Kryms1n I think that is the point actually. I because my soaking new office chair, proves it is effective. 5 ⭐
@Kryms1n - You've completely missed the point of the author's work, who's demonstrated excellence at focusing on the most important elements of what makes mind control so erotic. I've read mind control stories for over a decade, here and elsewhere, and I can assure you that the author is amongst the elite in the genre.
You're, of course, entitled to your views, but please don't punish the writer for not homing-in on the parts of the process that get your heart racing.