All Comments on 'You are Served'

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tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
THE OLD SAYING 1ST CUM 1ST SERVED

unless you are the catchee. TK U MLJ LV NV

bruce22bruce22almost 12 years ago
Nice Idea

Basically it ends up being an almost a pure stroke story but it is interesting along the way.

BfreetorunBfreetorunalmost 11 years ago
I have really enjoyed reading your works.

I skipped one or two that i did not care for the subject matter but all that I did read were good. I had read that "Atomic Solution" or whatever it was twice before. It also was a great but sad story. Thank you for all your writing. Lamar (Bfreetorun)

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Nice Tale

It seems to me the process server deserved to have a good life. Maybe now he will. Very enjoyable read. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great start

You remind me of Nixon in '72'......bill

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 10 years ago
A great finish -

For me anyway this is the last of the current stories on the site - so I am out of things to read -

Please fix this LOL

I enjoyed it Karma is a bitch but every once in a while she takes pity on the honest - I hope Tracy wants to do more than deliver a few bucks heh.

Well done and a good read -

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
nice sentiments, told well

I would like to know if Dell and his buddies got what they deserve.

Ib_SaysIb_Saysabout 7 years ago

It marred my enjoyment a bit that those bikers as well as the trucker didn't get the punishment they deserved.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice

Story good ending hope it worked for him

Buster2UBuster2Uabout 2 months ago

10 Big Blazing sTars for writer, I love a Happy Ending! LOL, I love a happy ending. I was hoping that they would become a thing. Maybe now that can happen. They both seemed so lonely. Thanks. Buster2U

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