All Comments on 'You Are What You Are'

I would absolutely ADORE it if you decided to turn this into at least a mini-series!

Ok, it's a fantasy and some will be unhappy with the fact that she would not submit so easily...but hey, it is very fun! Please keep the chapters coming.

Gotta have "act 2"........get to writing!!

Excellent little read. Hope you turn this into an excellent multi chapter story.

Very Nice!!! ;0)

Rape is not my fetish, but well written.

I'm enjoying this more than I thought I would at the beginning. Can't wait to see what happens next Wednesday... :)

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but its not what the want of hope for, TK U MLJ LV NV

Unlike most of the frauds who come here and read these stories, then try to pretend they're just reading them to offer suggestions on how they could improve, I read them to get horny and wank, and this story got me horny and I wanked, which means my cockometer says it's a great story so far. Thanks for your entertaining efforts, can't wait to read more.