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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Started out very nicely

I liked how it began with the girl so bothered and pestered by the guy. Thought this was a good set up for emotionally charged sex. But you lost me when they both *accidentally* ended up masturbating each other to an instantaneous, simultaneous orgasm.

BEERQUACKBEERQUACKover 2 years ago
loved it

know its been a while, wish you would add to this??

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Happily married, I write erotica for pleasure. For me, good erotica is 'real', be it tender and gentle or raw and raunchy. I welcome comments from readers, telling me what they particularly appreciated or disliked about a particular story. That feedback helps me as I try to d...