All Comments on 'You Can Love Too Much Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
1 star

Sick fuck.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Not sure

He went from having a cheating wife to giving blowjobs... Winning the battle? Yep, almost there.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
What the hell is this

I must have missed some chapters some where along the way 1

patilliepatilliealmost 7 years ago
Any guy that can swallow two dick loads

me thinks he doth protesteth his gayness too much!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wife Adjusting

To preserve this marriage, wife needs a major adjustment. Perhaps her fear of hubby getting some on the side will be the remedy.

ju8streadingju8streadingalmost 7 years ago

sounds like the cuckold is waking up and changing the game

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
1*

another cocksucking WIMP posting dumb cuck SHIT.

ScorpioJJScorpioJJalmost 7 years ago
Tony has to die

He was drugged and forced to blow two guys against his will. Once would be enough for any man who isn't gay. Tony would die and Jack would be castrated. The wife would be out on her ass and can explain to the kids why.

bayernpeter1bayernpeter1almost 7 years ago
What an idiotic bunch of crap!!!

Even its your pervert fantasy it have to be believable!! But your crap is only laughable!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
smart man

he had to suck cock so he should give her a cunt to eat after he has shot a load in it and if she won't eat it throw hwer out on her ass and don't take her back

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xalmost 7 years ago
Crap

I was hoping it would get better, got worse instead.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Why in the hell

do you let her anywhere near you, let alone in your house and around the family. There is no doubt you are a very sick individual.

What a poor day this is.

bruce22bruce22almost 7 years ago
Disagreable Subject Matter

There is no loving wife in here, it is just about a woman and her tricks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Passable

Some say Not believable But this guy's wife is apparently a psychotic bitch. This is entertaining At least marginally And I will keep on reading But there better be some bitch burning at the end of the story.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xalmost 7 years ago
Bite It Off

I agree with the comment, that if I found a cock in my mouth it wouldn't be attached any more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I agree, bite it off.

You should never put any body part between even a weak set of molars and incisors if he or she doesn't want it there. The flip side of that gem of common sense is that it's pretty unlikely someone can surprise you with a cock in your mouth. Then again, it's fiction, and you get to make your world when you write fiction, so I'll change my tune.

Bite it dude! Bite it off!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wrong category....you should be in gay session

The author did a very poor job on this ugly story. In fact the author has some serious gay issues mixed with some cuckold issues that were transported to this ugly story.

This story lacks of creativity, nonsense, shallow, low context, poor written and it is not even hot nor sexy story.

This story is not enjoyable and it is such waste of time reading all the way through.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
LW ?

Nothing but fag authors

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Dude, I have read 100s if not thousands of stories here, I never though I'd say....

Your story sucks, please stop. You may think you are progressing with some sort of plot or character sketch or whatever, but it is just an old middling tale of skanky wife, disrespect, and a manless male. Leave the deep analysis to other who do it well. Sorry Dawg, but its really bad,

Do Something else! Romance, stroke story, burn the bastard, anything to use your potential better!!! OldBearSwitch

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wrong

Should be in gay category. Stupid story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very unrealistic!

As a 50 year old man I can guarantee no man will start being a cuckhold after 50. Maybe this story sound good in your head, but it sucks in print. I wouldn't bother to read anymore of this insanity.

BuzzCzarBuzzCzaralmost 7 years ago
Sad

The story doesn't work. It's a bad story, badly told. I almost never give a 1* rating as I'll quit before finishing something completely odious. I should have done that here but for some reason, I read it all. It got worse I'm sorry to say.

rightbankrightbankalmost 7 years ago
That's not love

It is too much

Too much disrespect

Too much disgusting behaviour that has no place in a marriage.

Or on Literotica

lickitandstickitlickitandstickitalmost 7 years ago
quick jump from chapter 1

Maybe it would have been better if you built up from chapter 1 to the point they got to into chapter 2, Also probably alot more details, and character buildup, funny you mentioned JennyGently, She seems to be one of the best writers of these cuckold stories.. I'll continue on to chapter 3 though, now I have to see what happens to this poor shmuck LOL so you at least captured my interest.

ScorpioJJScorpioJJover 6 years ago
Did he forget his teeth?

One bite and it all would have ended right then. Tony would have learned a lifelong lesson. His friend would have been horrified and the wife could just go to hell at that point.

BaddestmanaliveBaddestmanaliveover 6 years ago
Damn

He wins by dumping her and moving on. Tony would have met my friends - Smith and Wesson.

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 6 years ago
When he woke up

with a dick in his mouth he should have bitten it off.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Vile

Sickening fag shit

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Geez, even more stupid than the last installment...quit while you're behind.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
DICKLESS TONY

I wake up with a dick in my mouth and I've still got teeth, there will be blood followed by someone's death. The bitch would have to also die.

Ib_SaysIb_Saysover 6 years ago
Just awful

I have absolutely no idea why the author thought this sickening shit would be entertaining, the story turned to shit with the last lines of the first chapter, but this here is just ludicrous.

Ib_SaysIb_Saysover 6 years ago
author trolling?

Why the hell didn't he kill or at least try to get some kind of revenge on the guys that had him drugged and orally raped him?

This chapter is all about him taking it like a bitch, one big LW cliche.

Honestly, I'm thinking that the author is trolling the readers, it's that bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
1*

fag cuck shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ah now its clear, you are a faggot!!!

What a bunch of shit by a pervert idiot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Sick.

Is this you and what happened to you in your married life.? She can cheat and maybe forgive her because of the love, but a real man with sound mind will not and would not allowed a dick in his mouth. I'm sure, he will raise hell and chaos to destroy the two men who put their dick in your mouth. Maybe kill them. So maybe it was you in this story to think like this because duh it's really gross.

Suck so no score.

Harryin VAHarryin VAabout 6 years ago
Told you folks this is author is seriously mentally ill

Remember chapter one husband is filled with shock and outrage and Promises of violence vengeance....

And for no reason suddenly the husband sides okay I'll let the wife keep fucking other men while she stays married to me and then chapter 2 you shocking Outreach husband's now swallowing another man's cock in his face and he has no idea why this happened

But he thinks he's winning the battle????

If Your wife of 30 years keeps fucking other men in front of you then tortures you and and has you ganged raped by other men ..... You're not winning anything

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Just eat a bullet, damn.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
to late

from the beginning of being awake and realizing what was happening they would have all died. but, since i would have put the bitch on the curb a year earlier it never would have happened. damned cuck shit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
This is just getting more and more pathetic

There is no saving this story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nope....sorry.

You lost me soon as I started the 2nd chapter. A wimp ass cuck. No thanks

MightyHornyMightyHornyabout 6 years ago
Geezus Krist...

If LOVE means allowing that kind of shit to happen to you...

Better to never being in love. Ever.

There's quite literally six moments retold by the cuckold here where, if it happened to me, I would definitely found a way to kill Traci. I'm not even kidding here - I would have killed the bitch and every single one of her playmates as soon as humanly possible, make their bodies disappeared, and go the rest of my life, acting like OJ, claiming my innocence while everybody knew I did it.

I have never loved anyone in my whole entire life enough to let them to the most benign betrayal the cunt subjected her cuck here... and I truly hope I never do.

For my sake, but, especially, hers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Yup, mental midget here......do you write with the pencil lodged in your ass?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
wtf

he wakes up and realizes he has a dick in his mouth ! BITE the dam thing off, after police and emt collect the wounde file charges and get a drug test done and file charges on the whole group. just one hard bite down and all the fun and games are over. Along with the marriage.b598

Schwanze1Schwanze1almost 6 years ago
Quickly

find help. Find a counselor before you snap.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
just in case your wondering

it's called justifiable homicide.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Disgusting cuck shit. 1 star.

andyinozandyinozalmost 6 years ago
FFS

How could ANYONE put up with this sh1t !!

Schwanze1Schwanze1almost 6 years ago
Did

you lose a bet that said you had to write a series that made you look like a sick putz?

Schwanze1Schwanze1almost 6 years ago
Just

bite that damn thing off when you wake up and find that thing in your mouth. WTF?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Kill yourself.

Taffbanjo2013Taffbanjo2013over 5 years ago
Horrendous!

No more like this, please.

Ib_SaysIb_Saysover 5 years ago

This author is either a gigantic troll. Or a twisted fuck that writes like shit.

Any heterosexual man who wasn't a complete sub, would either just have bitten down hard once he realised what was in his mouth, or just started punching like crazy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
WTF?

The author seems to be The gaylord of The cucks from planet cuck! Every Time u think it can't get worse ... U Come alone And post this! Did u Ever had contact with a Woman? I Mean The ones without dicks! Do Live in Ur mothers basement? How old are u?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Well that was complete bullshit

Think about it. He wakes up choking, mouth full. What does any man do? He bites Tony's cock off. ANYONE does that. End of story. The rest was complete bullshit.

meganann10meganann10over 5 years ago

This is one dumb husband and one sick story no more of this story for me

jrphdojrphdoover 5 years ago
Horrible!

What a loser! Can't even imagine thinking I loved somebody enough to let it go that far.

desertdog43desertdog43about 5 years ago
Forget

to put yer fuckin teeth in wimp ? 8 inch dick into 4 inch dick---chomp...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Idiot

To bad I can't give o stars

nestorb30nestorb30about 5 years ago
Love is not a reason to keep them

I am tired of the , " But I Totally Love her and could not live without her" Crap Look Love doesn't equal doormat. This i am staying because i love her is nonsense pure and simple

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Husband

Is.one weak,wimpy, cuck idiot. Wife is a stone whore. What a terrible story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Your kidding right??

Words escape me how anyone could put up with the crap in this part of the story..... As Clint famously said - its time for smith wesson and me to put a stop to this crapola.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
The Worst Shit

You have written. I had to just scroll to the bottom to type this. Signed: BTW

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
author is gay cuck prick

post ur gay fetish wimp shit somewhere else and not loving wifes gaylord

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Really

I’ve read stories like this before and they all fall down on a very simple fact, putting a dick in an unwilling mouth is inherently dangerous because the mouth contains an ideal weapon for the invasion. Just bite down hard and it’s message received lol

jtwheelsjtwheelsabout 4 years ago
Please cut off somebody's dick and nuts

Please help wimpy Cucky

Tootight1Tootight1about 4 years ago
good story

No, I didn't like some of the things she did, but it wasn't my life. Hubby was, shall I say annoyed with it, but stayed, why, because he didn't want to loose her. Call it love, if you want. Some guys would have gone for it, some obviously not, according to the comments. I wish him well.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
So this is what happen s

When 1000 monkey's are out in a room with 1000 typewriters. Certainly not hamlet. Utter nonsense.

FireFox59FireFox59almost 4 years ago

This fucked up mess is a continuation of Chapter 1??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Gay male

Disgusting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
NOPE!

I have been in some bad situations but waking up to what this guy did would have wound up with a dock getting bitten OFF! See what that does for sleaze queen and her pieces of meat.

skruff101skruff101over 3 years ago

Chapter starts with the idiot sucking dick, did his wife have all his teeth pulled out while he was out.

The human jaw has been recorded exerting pressure in the range of 170 to 270 ppsi pretty sure he could have made short work of any fleshy object inserted, so perhaps he was to busy enjoying the experience and didn’t want it to stop.

SwordWielderSwordWielderover 3 years ago

I normally like your stuff, but I can only hope you redeem yourself in the following stories. If I woke up with a dick in my mouth, I'd bite down with everything I had to try and sever it. I might be beaten; I might even die but it would be worth it. Why didn't he move into a separate bedroom?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Fucked up

I think this is the most fucked thing you have wrote.

PorterrhPorterrhover 3 years ago
Can yo give negative scores

Because this is getting worse

mattenwmattenwover 3 years ago

It is a shame that there is no worse rating than 1 *. This crap would be worth - (minus) 5 *!

Schwanze1Schwanze1over 3 years ago
Dumbass

Dipshit deserved it for being a dumbass. Little pussy should have bitten the damn thing off.

26thNC26thNCabout 3 years ago

Read this again, and I'm pretty sure Hooked was hacked. He could not possibly have written this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Lol He should have cut his wife and Tony up with a chainsaw

JacktacularJacktacularalmost 3 years ago

This can’t be possible in real life, I mean I can’t begin to believe anyone would take that and not go all 'Lizzie Borden' with an ax on mutha fuckers!

Ocker53Ocker53almost 3 years ago

Garbage from beginning to end⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great heart-warming story of true love and "real life". BTBAAC may not like it but real men real connoisseur of artistic cuck-raac stories like Legit Cuck-yeah Nostra and Cuckmaxos and Odiouser have most definitely enjoyed this story. 5 stars! Keep more cuck raacs coming!

hicountryriderhicountryriderover 2 years ago

I have no sympathy for the sky hes deserving everything that hes getting and then some.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thus us ridiculous, they invented guns to protect you so why isn’t he shooting them? If I was on his jury, he would be found not guilty.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

I’ve never read a story on Literotica that turned my stomach as badly as this one.

Read no more of thosP. O. S.

Bill S.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Faggot fodder

mmbny47mmbny47about 2 years ago

What a crock of shit!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is total sickening BS heart-wrenching stomach-turning disgusting crap and should have been stricken and refused by Litertoica!!!!!!!

Wish there were NEGATIVE STARS??????? About a negative -10 or worse!!!!

As good as many of your stories are, this is absolutely the worst and probably one of the worst we have ever read on this site!!!!!!

You sure you didn’t have some dipstick perverted ghost writer for this one?????

You have lost all your appeal to us as a writer and sunk to the lowest level of crapola way below any other disgusting level of sick porn!!!!!

We canceled you off our author list and moved on to anything that is not nauseous, repulsive, abhorrent and revolting♠️♠️♠️♠️♠️

Hope you are lucky enough to survive your brain tumor and get the Dick out of your throat so you can again communicate intelligently……….

DrgwngDrgwngabout 2 years ago

This writer does nothing but spew total shit from a keyboard. Every single Mc always loses the ability to think or act while wifey is blowing him, every single Mc always reacts mildly or not at all to total disrespect. Talk about a formula. Everything is a repeat in different order. Worthless in every detail.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

"It's really tough to be pissed at her with her lips wrapped around your dick". Not when she's a walking disease from fucking half the population. Fucked story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

yuck, give it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Part one was a good scene setter but part two is a train wreck and I'm shocked that such BS as this could be spewed out by an author whose work I normally enjoy reading. I know love makes fools of us all but there is a limit to just what anyone is prepared to tolerate and continuing to love and live with someone who has drugged you, rendered you helpless then aided and abetted a serious sexual assault to be carried out on you simply doesn't fly. Then there is "It's really tough to be pissed at someone with her lips wrapped around your dick." Really? Do all men have such one track minds that they can't grasp when they are being manipulated? Especially when the woman doing the manipulating is a dangerously sick psychopath like this one. Pathetic.

NitpicNitpicover 1 year ago
This

This fellow is brain dead,he needs putting down.

cybertron84cybertron84over 1 year ago

find a shrink god these shit stories need better warning labels

GreWulfGreWulfover 1 year ago

No vote,Three chapters and out.

DrgwngDrgwngover 1 year ago

How does this Drek even rate a three whatever. The tags placed are completely misleading and fraudulent. Author is a gutter dweller for playing tag games.

DrgwngDrgwngover 1 year ago

How does this Drek even rate a three whatever. The tags placed are completely misleading and fraudulent. Author is a gutter dweller for playing tag games.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Quite a mindless jump from the first chapter. Utter rubbish.

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