by Hiddeninplainsight
Thank you for a very well-written and well-thought-out sexy romance that felt truly real. Perfect pacing and opening story length. So sweet and romantic. I cannot wait until the next installment - PLEASE let there be a next installment. Two other requests. You should add the tags "Romance" and "First Time." And, please let us know the narrator's name. Just so loved it!!!
xoxo,
Di
Story is well written and beautiful. I loved it. I hope you continue writing. I look forward to viewing more of your work. Keep it up!!!!!!!!!! Again Beautiful story and well done!!!!!
Often, these stories are written by the CD so it is very refreshing to hear from the man's POV. I would be fascinated to learn more from you as you explain what it is that make's a CD so appealing to you....or this CD in particular. Please keep writing and thanks!
Oh, wow. Ok, so I absolutely love scenarios where I can relate to both parties in a scene, and this is definitely that. From the divorce, the repressed desires to be with a gurl, the guilt, and standards holding one above lurid trysts on the one hand...to the other. I can relate to Becky just the same.
This is a lovely tale. Not overwritten, no fetishistic overtones, but it's both touching and erotic.
Rocknut seal of approval hereby granted.
Thanks to everyone who has voted or left a comment on the story. I appreciate the feedback and will keep it all in mind for future stories.