All Comments on 'You Don't Tell Me What to Do Anymore'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Yessss

Sooo hot. Please continue

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Yawn

It started with potential and then was just stupid the whole way.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
*****

Well done. Well written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Too bad the father in this story did not shoot blanks. Stop trying to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Daddy???

Daddy is WUS !! He needs to grow a pair and give her a good slapping !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Classic! Loved it, great balance, good solid writing. Write more, please!!

Smart cookie daughter, opportunist Dad, lovable combat. Daughter won that one, but he did get to nail his hot daughter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Very good!

Well written and exciting! More please!

jleniljlenilover 7 years ago
Excellent!

I loved this story and its title. I especially loved the cigar smoking.

CorzineCorpsCorzineCorpsover 3 years ago
The dad is a pussy.

I've seen literal kids have more will than this guy. He needs to get some classes on how to dominate an argument. This story just made me angry at the dad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
They make a good pair.

She's a cunt, and he's a pussy.

He was a negotiator?????

No way. When she sat on his desk, he should have gotten up, thrown her over his lap, and paddled the hell out of her ass. If she was able to sit down within two days, she did not get enough spanking.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hot ...

ToughSailorToughSailor7 months ago

What a wuss is the daddy . . . .

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