All Comments on 'You Get What You Paid For Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
I hope there’s more to this story!

This was so hot to read. Had me hard the entire time

DevonCowboyDevonCowboyalmost 5 years ago
Great story

Humour, pathos and sex; lots of sex! What more could I wish for in a really well written story. Look forward to your next one

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

I’m sure glad this was just chapter 1 becomes I am all in. Looking forward to more of Teddy and Adam. Something tells me Adam will be back.... Well written and romantic as well as sexual. Great job. Five stars for sure!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
I love this story!

One of the best I've read here. This is so hot and wonderfully written. Can't wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Nicely done.

Great dialogue, setup, characterization, empathy, believability and flow. And for a guy who claims to just like to write smut, I think you surpassed that goal considerably. Five big ones and a new fan!

Thank you, brother!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Amazing

This was a fantastically written story, it truly captured my attention. I hope there will be more parts, as you can see maybe people enjoyed it and want more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Excellent

That was a truly magnificent read. Beautifully crafted. Can’t wait to read your next post(s).a5

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Awesome story

This is a very nice story and the first chapter makes me curious for more! Great characters and storytelling. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Very well written. Short story quality, not just porn. Absorbing

and emotionally gripping. Truly impressed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great

Seriously this is good and I can't wait to read more

Laura1234Laura1234over 4 years ago
I love this whole story line

Reading for a second time and it’s even better. I hope it will continue beyond four parts but it’s so well done in four

Great characters, great set up, ....

RobJasperRobJasperover 4 years ago
Great story!

Great story with plot buildup, good characters and wonderful sex! Glad there are more chapters! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
great story

ive not been on this ite for a year , i like a touch of romance between men i enjoyed this story very very much x jonathan

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Gary’s Thoughts

Rock hard...wanting more! Thank you

dooley95dooley95over 4 years ago
My Thanks!

Sincerely accept my thanks for reminding me of what I've missed, but more importantly, what I need. I thought I had no choice, at my age (82) to be celibate and muddle through life with an unsatisfied basic need. Looking forward to reading the next Chapters! Keep up the good and important work.

illwindillwindabout 4 years ago

So Adam is not only a prostitute, but he's also only gay for pay? I'm all for a romance that overcomes the odds, but damn, you're really stacking the deck against these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wow! I'm loving this story already.....

I really enjoyed this first chapter! So happy to have found it with several more chapters to continue reading. Nice work.

It felt like real chemistry between these two. Is Adam really that good at making Teddy feel cared for, or is there some unusual real connection! Great first chapter! 5 Stars all the way.

sm1982sm1982over 3 years ago

Well done. I was too distracted when I first saw this story published but I’m happy I saw it listed under the random stories category!

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Read this to the end, the final chapter. You won't regret a single moment that you give to this story, this Author. Five Stars, every chapter. Following this talented Author. So, so good.

TalkSexyToMe2029TalkSexyToMe2029over 2 years ago

This was a beautiful and touching beginning of a story. Talk to my humanity and I will follow your characters through hell. We are tactile creatures indeed. 💙

VerbalAbuseVerbalAbusealmost 2 years ago

A most unlikely house call from a prostitute.

And only 150$ discounted to 100$ for a whore advertising online? Seriously?

lorrisuelorrisueabout 1 year ago

Nice...I really enjoyed that, not my usual kind of read

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