All Comments on 'You Have No Right to Ask Me That'

Vary good start to a story im sure has alot to offer. Please continue!

Please continue! Looking forward to more!

can't wait to see where this goes

For a first, this is already incredible! Definitely keep going! Maybe some longer chapters next time? Loving it! Thanks!

impressive start don't make us wait too long for the next instalment

Don't stop. Waiting for the next chapter with baited breath.

I did not read the entire story, so I am not scoring your content, but you are a good writer.

Your writing style is really good but I think this chapter needed a little more build up and to get a little more into the head of Shaine to give us a better picture of what's going on. Everything seemed just a bit abrupt but I'm curious to see what has happened and what will kick off next.

A decent start.

It's a definite good start and you should keep it going. These 2 characters are interesting. Some background on them would be great!

I think that the idea to start this story off like this keeps you in suspense and keeps you wodering what happened to thses guys prior to this. Sometimes starting off a story with that vital statistics of a person gets boring, So this is a good thing not having a background to start with

interesting

Now where's the rest?