by Carnevil9
It's always obvious which writers are guys with little dicks. this kid is supposed to be hung right? Oh wait; huge. explain this sentence, "gradually taking in his entire length. He felt her throat opening up to receive him" The poor sap barely reaches the back of her throat and is supposed to be huge?
And forget the priest. I didn't like the fact he fucked the mom. It's an incest story and a good one so keep it up.
Keep up the deliciously naughty story line.....Please......
You totally screwed up a good story in Chapter 3. The kid's a complete nutso. Mom's unrealistic. And dumb. The padre? Not very necessary. Bad idea involving him.
The whole setup? Un-fuckin-believable.
Sex is hot enough so you still get points (**).
READ the below series for pointers on how its done. Will help;
http://www.literotica.com/s/mothers-helping-hand-ch-01
...Strander
Considering what priests have been accused of in the past and present this isn't that far fetch. Between this and an infest video I came. *****
One thing if you start putting the focus on the priest I can only hope the person he is going to is a relative to keep with the theme of the story.
I love how the son is manipulating her for sex, it's so hot. If the trend continues and he makes her take it up a notch again, I can't wait for chapter 4!
At long last Maria lets her son do what sons do best. She opens her thighs wide and welcomes her boy's big fat penis up the vagina he came out of. Naturally Matt gives his mom the absolute best no comparison fuck of her life. "His eyes were half closed, and his teeth were clenched. He looked like he was lost in concentration, completely focused on one single task: fucking his mother's pussy." But of course--nothing can ever get a boy as excited as his own mother's cunt. For her kid his mother's cunt stands for everything that's warm and comforting, for unconditional love, for the very origin of his body and mind. Jamming his penis up between his mother's legs up to his balls and pumping away, the boy feels it's back where it belongs, enveloped by layers of clinging mommy-twat. Maria cums like crazy from Matt's focused fuck, and when the kid blows his young balls and fills his beloved mom to overflowing with his creamy semen, for the first time she understands the meaning of the word "bliss."
p.s. The priest is a distraction. Lose him.
At this point Maria will have to screw her son as many times a day as they can to get rid of the urge and settle back down. She finds a way to make that happen and her son gets his fill. The Padre' does penance and leave the local church for a while to change his ways back and returns with instructions for Maria. Thank you.
Damn this was fucking hot Maria fucking the priest was the best part because u added the additional part like "fuck me", or "ahhhhh ohh" and omg