All Comments on 'You Haven't Seen "Sexy"'

The writing was clean, descriptive and very hot. However, when they started fucking and rolling on cedar chips, that was a bit much. I can't think of many things that would be more painful than standing, rolling and fucking on a bunch of sharp pieces of wood especially with soft tender skin. He could have made the walkway out of gravel and it wouldn't have been less painful.

Try again. It began quite well and then fell apart. Sorry.