by magmaman
magmaman, where'd you do your sailoring?
I liked it. It really complimented ch. 01. I have to echo the hero about older women. The only problem is that now an older woman for me would be sucking oatmeal three times a day in a nursing home. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Man, the comment about a peacoat sleeve brought back memories of WestPac Widows from 32nd St--Wow-----Good story-
NOT lol -
Another good if predictable story with the typical twist at the end - and then some great questions to be answered by the reader nice job thanks. It stayed fun and interesting even if we pretty much knew where we were going -
glad he got it on with the older woman but just shows you - one night of fucking and a bust condom and....the slut skank whore is pregnant...about to fuck up a beautiful relationship...what a pity....
Liked Chapter 1! Danny didn't need the sidetrack. Chapter 2 was better left off the story. Dan
On its own Pt. 2 gets 4-stars. But the story as a whole gets 5-stars.
Hmmm... so, I realize this story is finished enough, certainly enough for a short story. But part of me wants a FTDS treatment.
Oh, and there’s a reason to have good sex ed in schools. The good ones show how to put on a condom correctly, and the best have the students try it on a demo-dildo for practice. Danny learned why it’s bad to have OJT with something this life changingly critical. “Yes Trainee Simpson, that’s the way to install the fan bolt into the gasturbine going into this operational commercial passenger jet.” Maybe that’s what happened to that 737- MAX.