All Comments on 'You Know Her, She's The One'

by Dale Jane Henparty

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 2 years ago
The taboo gene is real

What one thinks they all think. Such an uninhabited family brilliantly portrayed in a erotic tale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good, but.....it wasnt labeled as 'chapter 1'. If it was meant to be a stand alone story, you ended it too soon with several hanging storylines.

sirius23sirius23about 2 years ago

Dreadful. Not a turn on at all, sorry

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

was this written by a 13 yr old ??? so bad I cant even give it 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

MMM Yummy hope there is more all 3 all 4

Dale Jane HenpartyDale Jane Henpartyabout 2 years agoAuthor

Yes, here is a sequel, has to be proofed, edited, submitted, and then approved yet. I am about

to post a few other stories after I get a rejected story corrected and approved.

I also have a second Chapter in the final stages for Different Fathers.

I am attempting to get a couple dozen stories and pictures posted also. As soon as I can, I will get more edited for posting, but editors must be busy. I have an editor now worth his weight in gold, even at todays gold prices.

Thanks for your comments.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Why does she say his name in EVERY sentence? Very stilted.

Harvey8910Harvey8910about 1 year ago

This was a wild story and earns five stars for sure. I hope there is an update about how this story goes. Very sexy and very well-told. I loved it

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I am a ‘Mature,’ by Literotica’s definition; I am living with a nasty thinking writer captured inside of me. The writer is mentally female and can create straight and special stories. She was named ‘Dale Jane Hen-Party’ by my family for three seasons when I was twelve years o...