All Comments on 'You Never Know Ch. 01'

This is really good so far and I think that the "S" thing is quite cool and adds some mystery or whatever aswell so ignore the anonymous person from 08/08/11.

They're talking rubbish.

Really excited to see what happens next!

I stopped reading the instant I saw that you were using intials instead of names. Are you that lazy that you can't type in the names of your characters? If you don't care enough about them, then why should we?

Loved it, but could you please use names instead of initials?

I like the plot a lot; it is very unique from other stories I have read on this site. I can't wait to see where it goes..

But can you make up some actual names instead of S and J? They interrupt the flow.

Stressed me out, haha. Good job. It would flow better if you had used names though (although I understand not wanting to use real ones).

Write more soon <3

Wonderful job! I can't wait to read the rest of the story.