All Comments on 'You Owe Me'

Good story, well written and well edited. Believable and exciting. Well done.

Slow believable bantering buildup, delicious realistic dialogue. You drew me right in. And hot bantering sex which followed naturally from the flirting. A fine and arousing piece. Thank you.

The romance and the dating were gradually culminated by their first fucking, and of course without birth control mentioned. Perhaps you can take this story from here and work it more into a steady relationship affair where her belly starts to grow along with the other symptoms such as morning sickness, etc.

SUPERB!

Well-written and accomplished. Your practice has fared you well.

That's one of the best stories I've ever read. I enjoyed the dialogue as much as anything. Great build up to a wonderful sexual encounter. You rock.

well paced and very nicely written

Deliciously written! Tender and rough! slow and fast! Cozy and explosive! Will they meet again?

Is that it?

very sexy and erotic

Beautiful. I will read it over and over.

Excellent, very evocative, romantic and sexy!

Hope there is more To Cum!

I enjoyed that immensely

Very sexy without being raunchy. I loved it. Now I think I'll go take care of myself! Thanks!

Author controls pacing well with restrained, polite dialog, then allows female character to blossom in most arousing ways. Bravo. Pass the lotion.

Sorry that it has taken me so long to discover this writer and her extensive list of stories. I have many hours of good reading ahead.

This author is truly a pleasure to read.

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One of the best stories I have read on Literotica. So well written! keep up the good work.

Wow is almost all I can think to say. If this isn't the best author on Literotica, then I'm scared to find any better. This story, like the others, is SO well written that I'm there living it with these so very real characters.

Beautifully written in a timely and sensitive way. Nothing slutty here; just a slow erotic build up to their powerful orgasms and mine too - 73 years old and gone midnight

Don't get me wrong; cute, sexy story, very well-written. But there's something terribly implausible about it.

Emily is obviously sexy and seriously good-looking, as well as bright, funny, educated, with a respectable career. She obviously knows what she's doing, sexually and otherwise. Why does she keep getting involved with assholes? It doesn't pass the smell test. Brian was very lucky here, and from his comments, he knows it.

I quit reading. I couldn't get through the description of the woman showering and preparing for dinner. Tedious.

Well constructed story, slowly building romance and sexual tension. Well written with the reader wanting more, will search for more of your stories. When's the sequel.