All Comments on 'You. Owe. Me. A Conclusion'

Thank you for completing this love story.

It's been really overdue from the original author (hope nothing happened to him to prevent him being able to finish it) and I'm so grateful that you stepped into the breach. The transition from old to new author is almost seamless - you have had the talent to capture the raw emotions and bring it to a very good conclusion.

Thank you for completing this story. I was very bummed out when I invested time into yet another story that was not completed. Again, thanks for rounding it up.

Thank you so much for finishing this story it has been one of my favorites and i was crushed that it wasn't finished. You did a great job in continuing this story and the same depth was in you conclusion as the original author put into his. This was a great ending to a great story.

my main gripe with it is your inconsistency with the original. becky didnt climb in his bed naked, she blew him on the couch. really took me out of the story. besides that, it was very well done. very well written, just as descriptive as the first, even did a great job copying the original author's style. overall i'd say 8 out of 10 stars.

...at first, anyway. There was no re-introduction to the characters, no plot summary. I read the original series a while back, but didn't remember enough to just plunge back in without a refresher - especially at a point in the story where multiple sub-plots were all atangle. The frequent scene shifts without warning added immensely to the confusion and disorientation.<br><br>

HOWEVER, what you did with the original story after that was absolutely brilliant! I'm a sucker for romances, and this was VERY romantic. Not only that, most everyone involved was a real friend; they made sacrifices - mostly by putting aside their own wants/ needs/ desires - to ensure their friends' happiness.<br><br>

I'm not ashamed to say I cried several times reading this: the scene with Shannon at the restaurant; the old couple's story at the vineyard; and the parents' reaction to their kids' announcement. It was just SO beautiful to read the love and caring throughout the story, especially in these scenes.<br><br>

Thank you for completing the original story, and for doing such a great job with it.

I have to say, even with the little inconsistencies, this was very well done. Something tells me the rj wanted it to end on a sad note like it did, but this just cleans up his little mess quite nicely. :)

Maybe it's just me, but I would never attempt to complete another author's story without first being granted permission to do so. Your interpretation may be completely contradictory to what JT had envisioned. Oh, and the author's note is painful to read. Let/left? Your/you're? Wow!

Outstanding conclusion to a very good story. Well done.

Good story and Great extra effort. I couldn't ask any better literary style than we have seen in this series. Thank you.

As I was reading I could not have ended this story any better.

Excellent work I enjoyed it to the end.

THANK YOU

The whole story was awesome kept me interested from the beginning to the end. Great Job

Excellent story..though you didn't author the original piece you've done a nice job of summing it up and wrapping into a great package. Thanks for finishing one of the best i've read so far.

i may have thought of this too critically...this was good... but idk i couldnt get into it, honestly i was yelling what i thought to my friends...what i said near the end was 'if the first 6 REAL chapters werent s wonderful this losers version would be such crap' :/ sorry hun..i think its best to critisize...it seems to bring out peoples passion towards what their doing

Very moving ending to a terrific overall story.

Have read 2X and will many more times. In my top 5 favs on this site

I almost freaked out when I got to the end of Chapter 6 and was at a wall. I am so glad that you finished it up! One of the best series I've read!

use it, please.

really good story

this is so bad. this is nothing like rj's submission.

this is a good ending i think, it isnt the same story, but at least somebody tried. instead of complaining, i think you did a good job. well done.

I don't like this ending at all.... And whoever wrote this ending, did you ever think that rj might write one, you just have to be patient. I would have rather it ended like how it did in the last chapter. Rj is a lot better writer.....

I really enjoyed the story many thanks.

Mark S

Nice job with the story, yet it seemed like the story could've gone more chapters. Nice ending for Laura and Chris, shows where he get the "I owe" from. Would like to see more of your works from you in the future, best of luck.

The ending was a shocker I didn't expect the issues to resolve so neatly..nice!

I read through all of these comments, and I for one was shocked! Many (but not all) of you instead of saying 'A' for effort, or nice try, if you didn't like it, verbally whipped this author who made a (in my opinion) excellent ending to this passionate series. Well done, sgeorge, not only for the good literature (even if spellcheck would have been nice- anyone could have read it), but for the fact that smoothly transistioning from a different author's work to your own continuation if very, very hard, and you did a great job. 5 Stars and 3 cheers!

Excellent wrap up of a fine story. While the orginal author constructed

a fine tale, with the only weakness the final chapter. This author put the finest possible ending to this piece.

I thought I was going to have to give up on an ending to this story. Thanks for writing it. I think all in all you did the best anyone could without actually having written the previous 6 chapters yourself.

Your ending was fabulous. It actually brought tears to my eyes, unusual for an incest story! The characters were believable, lovely and dynamic. Both authors swung for the fence and hit it. Thanks so much!

I could only give you a four on this because of the whole chapter on smoking pot. The rest of it gets a five. Well developed characters, simple plot with a nice twist at the end. Becky played her part well but couldn't say so much for Simon. The parents role was great. Having them gone so much of the time yet having them in loving and caring rolls made it believeable. All in all good job. Now it's off to see what else you have written.

Great job on a wonderful ending!!!!!!!!! Thank You! 5 stars

I just discovered this story yesterday and loved it. I was about to leave an upset comment about the ending when i saw that you'd written an ending, and i must say you did an excellent job. I was cautious at first, reading a conclusion not by the original author, but you quickly easied my mind about that.

I am, however, still curious as to where the creater wanted the story to go.

In closing I'd just like to say that i love the little bit of wordplay in your title

Not only hot, but a real believable love story!

my favorite out of the hunderds that ive read

I think that considering you aren't the original author you did a spectacular job with this story. I can't wait to read more of your stories.

Considering you are not the one that started the story you did an amazing job with it. I look forward to reading more of your work. Sadly, I must say that I would like to know how the original writer would have ended it. Thanks, though, you really did an spectacular job bring the story to a close.

When I started reading this series I thought it was about the best I'd ever read. But the drugs turned me totally off of it. I think it could have been written just as well without them. Just not needed.

Your "Conclusion" is great, and makes me feel a little better about the whole series. All in all, I suspect that, for me, it is better than the original author would have done, if he intended that there be a conclusion at all.

thanks for finishing this it is one of my favorite series and i was upset hen the original author didnt finish thank you for making a great finish

Good conclusion to some one's story, Look forward to read more submissions by you.

You are a decent writer, but this ending is rediculous. 3/10 for effort.

not bad not bad at all good ending good writing i like the whole series just waiting to see what Rjs last chapter will be but good job over all

Fuck why these guy said. The collaboration stage fluid. You all did great and these guys that are rating you and whatnot can't write for shit^_^...hope more stories come out like this, detailed and well exemplified. Let the words read themselves...~Klown

Great story. I wish the end was better though.

9.5/10

the end was to soon. i would like one more; story is unfinished, the trials the kids will have to over come. still i give the top score, with my thanx..

I disagree. The ending was concrete in my opinion. You left off perfectly where the cliff hanging moron ended. Good tid bit about the wine. Good romance. Good sex. Congratulations. You did this story justice

this is so far, the best story i ever read! it wasn't just for erotic purposes but there was an actual storyline. i made sure i didn't touch myself. cause i knew that if i did, i'd never finish the story. your story kept me on the hook! till the end! it was a love beyond description! thank you. so much!

Well I must say by far the best. To all that helped make this story bravo

I hope more stories cum. Lmao

Im really glad you finished this story. It has been by far one of my favorite ever. and it Needed This ending. Also having it have so much more story line, rather than focused just on the sexuality has made it even better, thanks

Great finish!

One of the best stories I've read!!

Great ending

Absolutely One of the best build-upd and finishes I have found on here. Real talented writing.

While perhaps not as eloquent in style as rj, you more than made up for it with an inspired conclusion. It needed to be done and I am very glad you were the one to do it. Thanks again.

You really did a great job to conclude this story, it was well thought through and most of the time it was hard to notice the author had changed :) thank you for giving a brilliant end to a great story

I liked the story although the pot part was a bit of an embellishment and off topic.The only part that I was a little sour on was,how many times did they have sex in 48 hours?Lets see,they had sex 3 times,masturbated at least once and boob sex once,hand job at least once and she gave him 2 or 3 blow jobs,plus the one he got from Becky.Thats somewhere in the neighborhood of 10 times in less than 48.Ive had some interludes with some incredible,stunning,sexy,horny,goddesses and not had sex 10 times in less than 48 hrs and I LOVE sex.Also,why or how would you want to,need to or even be able to,get a blow job after having sex 4 or 5 or 6 times in 1 day?Ive had sex for a couple of hours thru the entire night a few times and I was sore and drained the next day,in ALL areas.Other then that,it was a great story and she was truly the kind of girl every man wants and he came to his senses and got on track at the end.Again overall,real good,one of the best well balanced stories on literotica.

At first I was a little apprehensive about reading your ending to a different authors work. After reading this I am very glad I chose to read it. You finished the story a very great way and it was enjoyable to read. at first the differences between you two authors was slightly noticeable but towards half way through the first page it was becoming increasingly difficult to tell the difference. Even though I wish the original author had written the conclusion I am glad you took it upon yourself to complete this work of art.

never good to steal another writers story you don't like the way he ended it get HIM to finish it or just accept it as is. it is illegal to finish another writers work with out written permission from said writer which you don't have. del;ete this fake before you are banned and arrested for plagerism and never steal again.

1. Plagiarism is laying claim to someone else's work without giving them credit. sgeorge noted this work is based on characters and events from rj228212's story.

2. Sadly, the original author has not touched the story in over five years.

to sgeorge... I know it's been a while, but this is a respectable ending. When I first saw this I too was worried it would be crap or wouldn't flow or would not carry the same emotion as the earlier chapters but you did an awesome job. I'm glad I stumbled upon this.

The last anon reviewer can go suck a donkey in Tijuana... Thanks sgeorge for repairing the story. Up to Chris thinking with his dick I had been copying/pasting all into a single rtf file for my private reading and keeping. What the original author did killed the story for being the great love story it had the potential to be. Your ending at least washed out the bile taste out of my mouth. :) So once again, THANKS xD

Ok the ending wasn't from the right wrighter but you did a wonderful job thank you

Good to see it all come together. You were on the right wavelength, I think.

The voice was regrettably different, but of necessity, it is so hard to copy another writer's voice. However the writing of this last piece was very well done. And the last line was a perfect way to end the story.

Thank you for taking your time to finish a story so many of us wished complete.

Thank you for completing the story - perhaps rj will come back at some point and write his own ending, but until then, kudos to you for providing the characters (and readers) with closure. Well done.

you should have had Jack shake Chrises hand otherwise great ending

Not too shabby. I do regret not seeing rj's own conclusion, and thank you for trying to bridge the gap. You might have inspired me to try my hand at an epilogue. But down to business: I do like your thought processes. You breathe life into the characters very nicely. Watch the grammar a bit, though. Liked the flashback. Liked the parent explanation bit, but I think it happened a little too fast. The conclusion was okay, all around.

it is never ok to finish someone else's story, I bet you would be one of those asses that throws a hissy fit when someone touches their story. IF you are smart ( and you already proved you aren't) you will delete this story and apologize to the readers and especially to the original writer.

Well written. Don't mind the other for you did mention it before you continued the story.

I've read and re-read these stories several times and they still get me everytime.

Thank you so much for giving me a conclusion. That was the worst cliff hanger in the history of horrible cliff hanger and the original author seems to have completely forgotten about it. Was it perfect? No. But it was so needed.

Great story, well written, thank you!

always nice when a story gets an end .I hate when a story goes unfinished

Sgeorge,

Thank you. I think the original author, he or she would comend you on

this final ending.

This has been amazing. So much of a story with zest and always kept you woundering what they where going to do next. A fan you have gained

Come on I loved this series. Do more if it I'm so into this. I hate that it is ended

@sgeorge

@rj22B212

Outstanding series. Outstanding conclusion. I loved it!

A really good story is when you get to know and empathize with and care about the characters involved. I would love to read a full novel from this author as I enjoyed getting to know these characters, even the walk on parts as it were. Thank you.

This was the perfect ending for this story. Thank you for sharing it.

I only discovered the series this week. I was surprised that it stopped on a cliffhanger and searched for rt on the board. That led me to your conclusion. How very sweet. You did such a nice job capturing his characters and much of his writing style. Not an easy task! thank you

Thank you for finishing this. I just found the series and would have been gutted if it did it have a conclusion.

I love the way you kept to the story. It felt like the same author wrote it. I hope to see more stories from you in the future

Sgeorge has done a more than wonderful job in completing this story...he has mastered the emotional side of the original author, and been true to the theme of the entire series....Thank You for a most acceptable ending...THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU...

**5** STARS...WELL-DESERVED, MORE THAN WELL-DESERVED, WELL-EARNED!!

The story needed more sex and less talk.

Talk about characters hanging!! Where is the rest of the story?

I absolutely loved everything about this whole story! Emotional roller coaster is completely a reality. Please continue to write.

Well, I made a comment awhile ago and then found the conclusion. Great story; love building slowly yet passionately, emotions, disappointment and then true love discoverd. Great conclusion but needs a sequel to see where it continues.

A masterpiece of emotions! I am 77 years young and have never enjoyed a writing in literature more than I have this piece of work! I. Owe. You.