by MaryannePeters
Interesting start…the ending is different, expected Jules to make an appearance..
Interesting concept but it feels like you changed stories in the middle, swapping Jules for Ken with no explanation. It would also have been nice to know what really happened to 'Steffi' to make her so compliant other than, oh, I'll just go with it. Lots of unanswered questions.
Our new girl thought that girlfriend Jules wrote the card, but he did. I suppose that this begs the question about where he came from?