All Comments on 'You Won't Remember This Ch. 04'

Well, is she?

Kathy said that Denice was an only child. At the end, Denice mentions a brother. Which is it?

I generally like your story but you said Denise wouldn't understand your incest because she was an only child. Later you said she was jealous because she wasn't that close to her brother. If she's an only child, how can she be close to her brother?

First she is an only child and now has a brother. Guess you didn’t think far enough ahead when writing this. Also she took the guy to bed when you told her to break it off. It seems that not all you say when they are under works. I am enjoying the story keep it going. I know if I was in his shoes I would have f—led them both by this time. t

Too many inconsistencies in this one. Drop the friend and add the mother to the story.

No don't drop the friend keep it going!!

Good story.

Loved it, keep it up. 5 stars as usual.

It was bad enough adding the friend and forcing his own sister to have sex with someone she didnt want to to fulfill his own desire. I do wish he cared more about his sister romantically and was more posessive of her maybe. 5 stars anyway. Keep it up.

People may disagree. But I feel you have written the stories really well. And people this is fantasy. There always is liberty for authors to write what they feel like. Please continue can't wait for the next chapter.

This is a fun read. Hypnosis is a great ‘dream come true’ theme, that mixes suggested action with real action and even hotter with incest stories- loved the added girl girl action that seemed more natural - even the spanking seemed playful and sexy. But I really liked that Denice *made* Kathy get on her knee at the end.

Wait…i thought Denice was an only child…no siblings for her?

Despite the minor oversight of the only child issue, I wish you’d continue this story.

Wonderful story, I would have rather had just sis/bro thing going turning into a romantic love story without anyone else. I do love the bushy pussies though, mature women should have hair between their legs not bald child pussy. Good story though!

A brother of Denice? She's supposedly only child.

Next: denice is denise, right? My preference being the latter.

Anyway.... Am enjoying this story tremendously.