All Comments on 'Young at Heart'

by SecondCircle

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cindylynn34cindylynn34over 4 years ago

Really enjoyed this one. You did a fabulous job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Unrealistic

Stretching/reaching. Not one of your better writings.

MSTarotMSTarotover 4 years ago
Bravo

Fabulous seeing a new story from you, old friend. And amusing as well, given that my current work-in-progress is also a mature story about a woman named Molly.

I loved the middle age settling in reality of old friends and how they drift apart. I stent today around people I've known for decades but not seen in months, if not years. It was at a life memorial for the mother of one of my oldest friends. Life being life.

Your Molly seems a bit wilder than my Molly, but I haven't gotten them into bed yet and she is already been teasing the main characters, Kyle's, brains out. I'll flesh things out here in a few days. Weather is getting bad; good time to write.

Now, go write another one.

MST

Sir GalahadSir Galahadover 4 years ago
As the designated driver ...

I was always the one who made sure the ones who had had too much didn't get behind the wheel or get into trouble. But I never had a girl or a woman react the way Molly did. Never so much as a goodnight kiss, never mind a wild ride on the magic mountain. Some guys have all the luck!

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