All Comments on 'Young Crossdress, Meets His Daddy'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
wow

omg,, this is so erotic,, I wish I was you,,,

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Man, this was hot!

Sure got turned on. Dream of dressing for a much older man. Please continue. Just ignore the spelling fanatics.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
spelling was... ?

This story needs to be re-written! Too many spelling mistakes also forced me to discontinue reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow...

You really need to work on your writing skills. The grammatical errors are just overwhelming your story. It is a good story, it is just that you are hitting us with an error every other sentence.

PepperpuppyPepperpuppyover 13 years ago
Young?????

Obviously so young you haven't started school.

Your spelling put me completely off the story and I didn't even bother to finish it. Use a spell checker in future!!!!!!

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