by Sliver02
Sure got turned on. Dream of dressing for a much older man. Please continue. Just ignore the spelling fanatics.
This story needs to be re-written! Too many spelling mistakes also forced me to discontinue reading.
You really need to work on your writing skills. The grammatical errors are just overwhelming your story. It is a good story, it is just that you are hitting us with an error every other sentence.
Obviously so young you haven't started school.
Your spelling put me completely off the story and I didn't even bother to finish it. Use a spell checker in future!!!!!!