All Comments on 'Young Love'

Despite some errors, the gist of this rekindled some very fond memories of my own.

Everything you could want from a story. Spelling is a bit off here and there but I don't care. Hope you continue writing.

I read this story a while back and was really impressed seeing as it is you first.

You should continue writing more stuff.

way above the literary average for this or any porn site - well done. The last vignette made it so much better.

Thanks

I liked it right up until the moment when she woke up miraculously fine and ready to have sex. You seem to love moving back and forward through time, I would have waited a few days so she wasn't feeling the after effects of a high fever, and didn't taste like puke.

I loved this story, it was really a good read and was just the right amount of pages. It wasn't too short or rushed and it wasn't so long that you lose interest. I really liked how you get to know the characters and the sex scene wasn't rushed.

Just wanted to bring it up on Romance section :D