by Imakewetspots
Wonderful story! I also love an older woman who takes charge and a good prostate massage! Very much looking forward to part 2!
Wonderful writing! I like the character development and pacing. Not just another "Nice to meet you. Wanna' fuck" story. Great descriptions of the passion that inflames the mind and drives the body into the fires of lust!
Best regards from Key West,
Charles
I usually speed read the intro and did here. I had to go back to the beginning to pick-up some details then read every word right through.
I don't usually read all of a 4 page story.
As has been said, a few errors but not worthy of criticism as the rest is soooo gooood.
Many nurses and practioners enjoy giving physicals to guys. Some have had guy shoot on them, many think it is funny.
Loved the pacing and seeing the thoughts behind all the characters! Definitely need more of this story, maybe see how he matures as their relationship progresses. Hope to see part 2 soon