I liked the story after I got into it. At the first it was a little confusing when it kept switching from Steve to Jon, but that could have just been me.
Middle aged crossdresser. wltm similar. I tend to rattle off my stories. I have re-read them sometimes. But found myself writing something totally different to what I intended. So please excuse the bad grammar. Obviously if you want to volunteer so edit..... All comments are...