All Comments on 'Young Tommy and Mature Cindy'

To teach a young man how to enjoy the pleasure of sex! Nothing like eating pussy, getting your cock sucked and of course a good fuck! Love it!

I'm all for character development, but yours was just waaaaaaaaaay too verbose. Furthermore, you exposed every one of your own personal sexual fantasies in a ridiculous manner----HUGE breasts, "squirting" (ewwww.....who really wants a woman urinating on them??!!?) and all sorts of other silliness. You took 8 pages to say what could have been said in 2.

boring

I nodded off during the first chapter, then scrolled into the second.

I didnt read the rest.

You forgot to include all the wars fought, the evolution of electronics during her lifetime, or how …….

never mind it was a snoozer.

I take that Cindy was also a pirate at one time in her life, due to her over use of the word arrgghhh

Not well written, almost impossible to stay interested beyond page two. Didn’t bother finishing the story.

Your story made me wish I was Cindy. Great read please write more.

SW

This is Lit, not high school history. It's about fuckin and suckin, nothing else. Anyway, dear author, thank you.

Don't believe it. This was a great story. Thanks

Phenomenal!

Outstanding!

Your comments about her "squirting" show your lack of understanding and experience on the subject of female ejaculation... not every woman does it, but it's pretty hot when it happens!

This writing is so embarrassing I can't put words to it. Can we figure out a way to delete the nonsense?E

Poster Anonymous / "SERIOUSLY" Your Ignorance of the female anatomy is showing ..!!! Squirting is an AMAZING and Delicious female talent..!!! If you are Sooo intelligent, then WHY are you ashamed to even post under a real username..!!

A Woman Squirting is pretty much the same as a male ejaculating thru the same orifice as urinating... same location, Completely different liquid and Source.. get your facts and brain in order before opening that pie-hole and exposing your ignorance..!!

The story was admittedly long and stretched out, but overall Stimulating... Next chapter just needs a good 3rd party review and editing/proofreading

Poster Anonymous / Seriously... **YOU** are the ASSHOLE... Squirting is NOT Urinating..!! You are showing your EXTREME IGNORANCE.... Squirting is one of the most AMAZING things a woman can do... and the taste is Soooo GOOD..!!

Lets see another chapter before passing final judgement..!!

A bit long winded but this is erotic fiction (maybe?). More please!!!

If Tommy ever returns, imagine Cindy straddling his face with her huge thighs and ass and squirting over and over again into the young man's mouth as she orgasms....

Fabulous, thank you

I found your writing very enjoyable, l only wish it had been a book, the story was very erotic and sexual and had me so very turned on.

Please ignore the idiot who wrote the last comment and keep up the writing.

Thank you.

What a wonderful, enjoyable and well written story. I can’t understand the negative comments. Too bad you have not written more stories. Please do!

This is a wonderful love story in every resepct, and it could just as easily have been placed in the Romance category. Great plot, engaging characters, and tender love are all here in this heartwarming story. Five Stars.

I agree with some of the comments. This story was way too long, too much explaining of things that didn't need explaining. I hate when an author tells you in detail which armbwent where and which leg went where. It takes you out of the mood. Her back story was also way too long and not necessary. Cindy did sound like a hot 64 yr woman so you lade me believe that. Wasn't bad but wasn't good

Loved the story, thanks!

Great story. My only criticism is too many references to her "old snatch". I can't imagine in the heat of all that, either one would be thinking what was old and what was young. Maybe after, or while reminiscing, but not during. Just my personal experience. Thanks for sharing

Marvelous take very erotic n believeable

Great story loved every moment of it. But I agree with a previous comment the word snatch was a little over used towards the end. But didn’t detract from the enjoyment of reading such a great story.

Some fine writing. Loved the history and detail. Very sensual and erotic. I’d love an afternoon with that woman. My only question was how was Tommy supposed to be home hours ago? Didn’t he live alone? Cheers.

[18.08.22]

Beautiful und Romantique!

11/10!!!!!

My criticisms:

His cock isn't even 7 inches long and it's massive? Big? No way. And the dick head is bigger than the shaft? Impossible.

Also, Cindy says his name way too much. In real life, no one says the name of someone else in pretty much every sentence they say. This really bothered me. Was very unrealistic.

Other than that, this is a really hot story. And I always come back to it. Really one of the best.

Loved it !!! I hope Tommy returns to Cindy's bed soon as I believe there is at least one experience left for him to enjoy and given the fact that he worships her ass it's an obvious one. More soon please oh and ignore the idiots that don't have the guts to put their name to negative comments and who don't have any stories of their own published

Too many words, too little substance.

I had to stop half-way through page two. Between Cindy did..., Cindy felt..., Cindy was..., Cindy is... etc. and the dry dialog, I couldn't continue.