by sirreadsalot10
...keep going. Fun story w/ hot action in it. Can't wait for next chapter.
Once again I loved the sex. But the story while its fun just has layers of complication built into it. The writer then peeels one layer away as he introduces two more layers for down the road. Like all good stories here I hope this doesnt end soon and I hope another chapter is posted soon.
"Cameron Fucking Reed? Who knew. Hehe
Thanks
The sex was hot but I loved the whole questioning thing... Like can he really beat Tyler? Or what would Sarah really do? Good stuff, keep it coming!!!!
i while i know that a lot of shit has to hit the fan, i cannot wait for more chaptersm keep it coming its great
I love the story, and the action. Can't wait for the next one!
i understand why he has sex with them. But i feel SORRY for his GIRLFRIEND . you know the one HE LOVES!!!!!
Going strong the way it looks! The story was kind of weird to jump in at the third chapter so i had to go back and start at the beginning. Hope you continue till the end!
It's going quite nicely. I'm worried about Cameron and Sarah though. I hope things will work out. I like Jenifer a lot though and how she and Cameron are growing closer as well.
....got a kick out of 18 year-old Beth ("never been fucked so good!")-there's always a few like that in High School, ones who really are jaded by 19! Less misspelled or misused words now and I don't feel sorry for anyone here!
You've got me hooked. I'm loving Cameron so much. Like the concept of the whole Alpha has to have sex to steal the female pack members away from Tyler. It's a tough job but I suppose someone has to do it! LOL. Cameron doesn't seem to mind too much.
I'm interested to see how he reconciles this with his feelings for Sarah. If you're going to bring the concept of mating into the story and if your Alpha will turn out to be monogomous in the long run. Not that I have an issue if he isn't. People write Weres in different ways. If the characters are lovable enough, a non conventional pack can work as long as all parties involved can cope with it :-)
You really did a good job capturing the feel of high school students who have been thrown into a strange situation. I find it remarkable that they are able to hold onto their unique personalities even though they have been through some terrible events. Its nice that you interject humor into the story to lighten the mood. It makes this more entertaining to read. Beth is really funny.
I've enjoyed it so much so far can't wait to see what else you have in store. CAMERON FUCKING REED!!!!! XD
This story has got to be one of the best ones I have ever read and I have read a ton of them.
I'm slowly reading my way through Young Wolves. I'm taking my time, relishing each description, each thought provoking sentence and paragraph that tells me about Cameron and his new pack. The writer is truely gifted and I am so looking forward to reading all he has written including the Outlander series. Sirreadsalot10, have you considered writing and publishing a book?