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All Comments on 'Younger Than Springtime'

by Kat900

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oldtwitoldtwitover 4 years ago
Well....

Well a good idea but just so rushed, slow down a bit dont go overboard with it all.

It needs rereading and sorting out so many missed placed words that just spoil it .

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