All Comments on 'Your Eternal Reward'

It's impressive how you manage to make every genre so damn adorable :D

Very enjoyable story, thank you very much for writing it :)

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Well it's not *not* my thing, but apparently didn't really do that much for me - which I'll mostly put down to content rather than writing because the girls made me smile a bit. It did feel a little ... empty though? not quite the right word ( for some reason my brain wants to use "vacuous" but not really sure that's it either ), just missing something anyway. I'd be interested in what Liz had to say.

Very much liked reading your story; characters were likable and the premise was something I didn't know I wanted. This has got me wanting to read your other work!

5 stars!

Also, too; moar please!

I wish I was Conner, What great characters and how well you desoribed them. That's a kind of hell I never imagined in my most witd sexual dreams.you shord do som now adventures for the heavenly fanny of sinners. What an existence!!!!

Thanks for a good horny read.

Mlm

This is probably the funniest thing I've read since The Saga of Littown. Loved every word, 12/10 from me.

I really liked this one. It's nice seeing a story with futas that doesn't involve mindless fucking, domination or name calling with actual likable characters. I hope we had more stories like this.

I enjoyed reading your story.Keep up the good work.

Really liked the story . This is punishment ok 🥳

One of, if not, the best stories I've ever read for futa on male. I was grinning the whole time. 90% of stories with this genre also lack any feelings outside of lust. I truly love those romantic or sweet stories so much more.

If there's a way to do it I would gladly pay you to make more stuff like this.

I almost bust a gut laughing so hard when I read that line.

Blaming millenials for ruing everything...and now they’ve even ruined

HELL and ETERNAL DAMNATION.

PRICELESS!!!

5 stars!

I absolutely loved this, well done.

#diedlaughing #fuckingmillennials

Have to say this was one of the best I've read. Great story, fairly short but with good characters and relationships built throughout. Good Job. 10/10 will read again.

This was some completely entertaining writing. You took this story to another level when it comes to funny, hot, over the top stories. I could not have enjoyed this more. It was a pleasure to enjoy. Thank you for this because you made my weekend.

Simply incredible! Marvelous story! Please please pleeeeeeeeease give us a sequel!

"What, are we doing social commentary now?"

"I dunno. Maybe."

Seriously, well done

deff a great story, maybe your absolute best xarth. looking forward to your next one in this category. thanks for sharing

Love sociopolitical touch, sometimes blatant. Xarth being Xarth, never fails me. Never been into futa stuff butt (see what I did?) you make it enjoyable. Keep up the work. And by the way, I would kill for a sequel to Sisters Medicine. That is all, carry on.

Fantastic. Love the story line, and the story telling is brilliant.

What did Connor even do to get to hell in the first place?

God damn Millenials ruining Hell.

Maybe hell ain't that bad. If Heaven is filled with Mormon and Catholic zealots, then the underworld sounds much less stressful.

You always do it the best, even when it's futa/andro-girl on buttslut boy, which isn't my favorite sexually speaking. What made this one so special for me was the particular reversal of dynamic present. I'd been looking for it all week (partly inspired by Kisses from Hell) and I was starting to think I'd have to write one myself if I wanted it; the best way I can describe it is with the old classic saying "I'm not stuck in here with you. You're stuck in here with me." The victim forced his tormentors to submit to him through sheer refusal to feel punished, and it's beautiful. Thanks so much. -Nat

I usually stick to your incest/taboo stories but this one was definitely a pleasant change of pace! Well written, and fed nicely into my fantasies. Wish it was rougher (Not in action but reaction), but i guess it was interesting to see an insanely slutty character. 5/5. -EroticAvocado

I expected this to be at least somewhat cruel at some points, or in worst case the kind of "domination" where the futas use force and are super cruel and make the reader feel uneasy instead of making them have bones. But instead.. Heaven! Very nice. The kind of story I like. Another unique plus is the character of Demi. Never saw before a cute older tsundere demoness. I loved it. This is the fourth or fifth story this year that I read that are of highest quality. Wholesome futadom, the way the boys dream about it. Enough rambling from me. Thank you for this amazing story!

Face it, if heaven is filled with celibacy and those fuckin zealots, the hell doesn't sound bad at.

And here I thought I had a dirty mind. I write stories to entertain myself, but

I love your stories. Thanks for a great story.

An incredible twist on going to hell and eternal punishment. Loved it! TTFN

This one deserves a higher rating than a 5. I've read it multiple times. TY

I so want this to happen to me

Another reread that I just love. I guess it kinda shows that one persons hell is someone else’s heaven. I do miss more stories like this but the current stuff from Xarth is still awesome reading. I guess I just see this as classic Xarth and who doesn’t love a well thought out and perfectly crafted classic. Thanks again.

J.D.

Aww, just adorable.

Maybe Hell ain't that bad.

Great story. Connor is so sweet, it's no wonder that the girls all love him in the end.

A five star favorite.

This is an aborable story. And very sexy.

You ar3 such an incredible writer. Sometimes you remind me of Larry Niven.

Brilliant!!!

Excellent!

What a cleverly brilliant, wickedly humorous, twist on themes of the afterlife. Well done, thank you!

I *lost* it at the social commentary gag about millennials. Well done! This story was so sweet and not and just made me feel all warm and fuzzy. I loved it!

So wholesome, reminds me of some other reads that aren't supposed to be but later on you love all the characters. A very rare sight at least for me to like all the characters.

Amazing. Just amazing all the way through

What a different story. I think I’d like to be in that kind of hell. I could get use to all that butt fucking. 😈

I have to give this story a solid 10 stars….

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I've read a lot of your stories and this was my favorite. Please write a sequel! Xoxoxo

If they think we millennials are down bad, wait until they meet the zoomers.

Dude. This story was fucking hilarious and so damn tender at times. Easily a 5/5, I'd go higher if I could.

****

What Demi said towards the end probably cracked me up the most tho.

Demi glared at the two of them. It had no effect whatsoever on their impertinence. "I miss the days when everyone screamed in fear at my approach," she grumbled sulkily.

This shit felt like a line straight out of Shrek: Forever After lmao!

''Do the roar''

Hahaha millennials ruin hell too! Brilliant 🥰🥰🥰

If that is Hell then it doesn't seem to be a bad place.

I think that this story is the absolute best story to end all 128 of your works. And you should move this story to the end of all your works whenever you add one.

That was awesome. I only wish the girls would've fucked each other's asses in demon form sometimes.

This might be my favourite story on this site. I love it

This was so sweet, I love it. I wish everybody could have such a loving eternity. I didn’t cry about how sweet it was, I wanted too, but I didn’t. This might be the best story I’ve read in a while, really helped with my depression.