All Comments on 'Your First Time Ch. 02'

It's getting better.

You're a gem. And I agree - I tend to feel, in general and not just per my own work - that those who have never written or submitted are at a disadvantage when it comes to commenting. I welcome every and all types of feedback, I just prefer smart, useful, and educated evaluations over personal preference bullshit. You know? So sad. Thanks for the thumbs up though! Another chapter shall be posted soon - longer this time! (But truthfully, not by too much. As I mentioned, I enjoy the episodic feel brought by shorter chapters.)

Imagine that Big MEANIE has no stories yet he wants to leave snide comments because it isnt HIS cup of tea. Keep goin holly! I wouldnt mind longer chapters but I KNOW how tough writing can be. This work could actually be posted in a couple cats and exhibitionist is definately one of them. I am enjoying yout effort and looking forward to seeing more. THANK YOU

Well, the original plan for this work was to start with a little exhibitionist play, then continue to develop in the direction of domination. Patience is a virtue, friend. And short, yet frequent chapters, I feel, provide an episodic feel that I tend to enjoy. So, to each their own I suppose.

This is a Dom/ Sub story posted in the wrong category. Irrespective of category the chapters are far too short. As an Exhibitionist story it is poor.